WO SADA SAATH RAHTE HAIN.......bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on June 22, 2012, 06:30:00 PM

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BANSI DHAMEJA

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JISKO CHAHTE HAIN DIL KI GAHRAEE SE
WO SADA HAMARE SAATH RAHTE HAIN

DOOR HOTE HUYE BHI WO PASS HOTE HAIN
KIYON KI WO TO HAMARE DIL MEN RAHTE HAIN
----bansi dhameja(madhur)


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Re: WO SADA SAATH RAHTE HAIN.......bansi

«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2012, 06:36:02 PM »

Aapne ek hi baat ko do baar repeat kar di hai......poetry ka maqsad hota hai to be very poetic whenever u say something........apne shero me aur khoobsurti paida karein.....achchey shayro ke padein.....aapke beech Janumanu jaise khoobsurat shayer maujood hai unki madad zaroor lein.


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mkv

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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2012, 06:39:02 PM »

Nice sharing.


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2012, 06:42:08 PM »

sajid ji main sahi maine men koi shayar nahin. kuchh likh tha jo apne kuchh doston ko pasand aaya to tohrha likh leta hoon . aap ka shukrguzar hoon ki apne chhee salah di hai. thanks


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Re: WO SADA SAATH RAHTE HAIN.......bansi

«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2012, 01:39:16 AM »

waah waah


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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2012, 02:38:43 AM »

Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 22, 2012, 06:30:00 PM

JISKO CHAHTE HAIN DIL KI GAHRAEE SE
WO SADA HAMARE SAATH RAHTE HAIN

DOOR HOTE HUYE BHI WO PASS HOTE HAIN
KIYON KI WO TO HAMARE DIL MEN RAHTE HAIN
----bansi dhameja(madhur)

aapne bahut acha likha hai bansi ji. ek baat kehu kya? aapka apna sher kyu sharing division mein post ki? aap ka bahut si sher padte aa rahe hai aap sach mein acha likhte hai. so... aisa hi likhte raheye ok na