WO SADA SAATH RAHTE HAIN.......bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on June 22, 2012, 06:30:00 PM
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JISKO CHAHTE HAIN DIL KI GAHRAEE SE
WO SADA HAMARE SAATH RAHTE HAIN

DOOR HOTE HUYE BHI WO PASS  HOTE HAIN
KIYON KI WO TO HAMARE DIL MEN RAHTE HAIN
----bansi dhameja(madhur)

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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2012, 06:36:02 PM »
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Aapne ek hi baat ko do baar repeat kar di hai......poetry ka maqsad hota hai to be very poetic whenever u say something........apne shero me aur khoobsurti paida karein.....achchey shayro ke padein.....aapke beech Janumanu jaise khoobsurat shayer maujood hai unki madad zaroor lein.
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2012, 06:39:02 PM »
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Nice sharing.
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2012, 06:42:08 PM »
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sajid ji main sahi maine men koi shayar nahin.  kuchh likh tha  jo apne kuchh doston ko pasand aaya to tohrha likh leta hoon . aap ka shukrguzar hoon ki apne chhee salah di hai. thanks
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2012, 01:39:16 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2012, 02:38:43 AM »
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JISKO CHAHTE HAIN DIL KI GAHRAEE SE
WO SADA HAMARE SAATH RAHTE HAIN

DOOR HOTE HUYE BHI WO PASS  HOTE HAIN
KIYON KI WO TO HAMARE DIL MEN RAHTE HAIN
----bansi dhameja(madhur)


aapne bahut acha likha hai bansi ji. ek baat kehu kya? aapka apna sher kyu sharing division mein post ki? aap ka bahut si sher padte aa rahe hai aap sach mein acha likhte hai. so... aisa hi likhte raheye ok na  Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2012, 04:55:06 AM »
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suman ji thanks.
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2012, 03:22:09 PM »
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