woh apni khushyan day gaya

by SUMBUL QAISER on January 18, 2010, 07:15:55 PM
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 wo apni khushyan day gaya mujh ko jatay jatay,
 Apni pori dunya day gaya mujh ko jatay jatay.

 bus ek pal k liay milnay ki aarzoo ki,
 na kbhe panay ki jisay justujo ki
 bin mangay mil gaya wo mujh ko jatay jatay.

 Haqeqat mei mila aur  sapno mei kho gaya,
 kaisa aaina dekha gaya wo mujh ko jatay jatay.

 khushyan mili hai itni kay gham ki jagha nahen hai,
 apna sab kuch luta gaya mujh par jatay jatay.

 kaisay shikwa karen hum k humain kuch mila nahen,
 kismat say mil gaya hai wo mujh ko jatay jatay
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2010, 05:56:43 AM »
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Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Sumbul ji. Nice creation. Ye do lines sabse achhi lagi:

 khushyan mili hai itni kay gham ki jagha nahen hai,
 apna sab kuch luta gaya mujh par jatay jatay.
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2010, 06:00:05 AM »
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Wonderful creation Sumbul ji.bahut khoob.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 07:39:28 AM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna hai Qaiser ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2010, 12:59:10 PM »
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Nice Qaiser ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2010, 08:04:38 PM »
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Very nice... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rahat Indoori Sahab ne farmaya hai...

Haath khali hai tere shahar se jatey-jatey,
Jaan hoti to meri jaan lutatey jatey.
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