***Ye Dil ***

by AVTAR RAYAT on November 19, 2010, 08:11:33 AM
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Aye Jaan,
Mere DiL Ke Har Kone Mein,
Naam Aapka Hai,
Ye Dil Fida Hai Tum Pe Itna...
Ke Ye Gulaam Aapka Hai,
Khuda Ne Bakshi To Hai...
Ye Zindagi Mujhe,
Par Ise Zinda Rakhne Mein,
Ehsaan Aapka Hai...!!!

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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2010, 08:44:46 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji hamesha ki tarah lajawab peskash.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2010, 09:31:09 AM »
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Ae dil..
tu maan le meri baat!!
bhool ja..
mat kar uski aas!!
jo nahi ho sakta tera,
mat dekh uska khwaab!!
ghott apne armaano ka gala,
pee le aasuon ko aur
mita de saare dard !!!
Ae dil....
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hats off really...bahut khoob Avtar:)
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2010, 01:11:41 PM »
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Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukria...
Madhu Ji...Killbill Ji...Thanx Alot

Killbill Ji...
Aapne Jo Lines Likhi Hein,
Un Mein Bahut Dard Hai,
Behtreen Likha Hai...
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Killbill ji aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat lines likha.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2010, 07:15:05 AM »
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good one!!! Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2010, 10:48:16 AM »
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shukriya dosto...
meri lines aapko pasand aai:)
Avtar ji...aap aise li likhte rahiye aur mujhe sikhate rahiye:)
Thanx...
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2010, 08:36:31 AM »
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avtaar ji. bahaut hi acchee aur sundar thought zaahir ki hai apne. bahaut acchhe.
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