yehi soch mein rath aur din

by tamanna1 on May 05, 2011, 07:31:27 AM
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Kehe tho diya unhe na milna humko
Lekin aankhen doond tha he baar baar unko
Unki awaaz ko bhi dabaadiyaa he humne
Lekin sunti hun wahi aawaz is andheromein
Kash mein unse na mili tho kitna accha hotha
Kash woh humse na bichada tho kwaab kitna saccha hota
yahin soch kar baiti hun mein raath aur din
Kahin woh wapas na aaye mujse door rehekar itne din.
Yeh soch mein padi hun muje woh chahiye ya nahin
Roz doondthi hun unhe raasthe mein mil na jaaye kahin.


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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2011, 07:38:42 AM »
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bahut achche tamanna , really loved these lines,
u got the talent to describe ur pain in a excellent way, good job dear


kab tu jaanegi mohabbat ko
kab tu mujhe mere yaar pehchaanegi
mohabbat mein haasil nahin hoti manzil aksar
na jaane kab tu is haqeeqat ko pehchaanegi
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2011, 06:48:42 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2011, 09:25:16 AM »
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thank you sahil ji....am logging in after a very long time.
hope i will be a regular from now on..thanks for the kind words and encouragement
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