BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

by BANSI DHAMEJA on June 15, 2012, 04:52:17 PM
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Saini ji ne kuchh likha hai. unse hi kuchh seekh ke main koshish kar raha hoon.

GUNAHON SE PARADA UTHANA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN
NAZREN MILA KE BAAT KARNNA HAR EK  KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

KAMAAYEE KA SAHI HISAAB  DENA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN
APAS MEN DOORIYAN GHATANA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

ROOTHE HUOYN TO MANANA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN
KAMMEE GAZAL  KI POORI KARNA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

JAB KISI KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN TO ‘bansi’ KE BAS KI BHI BAAT NAHIN

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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2012, 05:01:09 PM »
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 :clap Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 05:21:08 PM »
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bahaai aapne to hamaaree ghazal kee importance badhaa dee dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 05:50:30 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Bansi ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 06:06:38 PM »
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Bansi Jee Aadaab!

Badi pyaari baNsi bajayi hai janab, Saini sahaab ki dhun par ...
Achche khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya hai bahut khoob...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 06:49:33 PM »
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koshish achi thi
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2012, 06:54:29 PM »
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Saini ji ne kuchh likha hai. unse hi kuchh seekh ke main koshish kar raha hoon.

GUNAHON SE PARADA UTHANA HARE K KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN
NAZREN MILA KE BAAT KARNNA HAR EK  KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

KAMAAYEE KA SAHI HISAAB  DENA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN
APAS MEN DOORIYAN GHATANA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

ROOTHE HUOYN TO MANANA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN
KAMMEE GAZAL  KI POORI KARNA HAR EK KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN

JAB KISI KE BAS KI BAAT NAHIN TO ‘bansi’ KE BAS KI BHI BAAT NAHIN




 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))BAHUT ACHA
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2012, 02:28:08 AM »
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Bhut pyaari kosis hai.
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2012, 03:48:41 AM »
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saini ji aapka bahuty bahut aabhari hun. Thanks
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2012, 03:51:30 AM »
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parwaaz ji
kin alfaz se aap ka shukri ya adaa main karoon
sochta hoon, kabil ban ne ke liye main kiya karoon
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2012, 02:03:09 PM »
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MASOOM JI SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2012, 04:23:52 PM »
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@heer@ ji shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2012, 04:25:11 PM »
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khamosh awaz ji apka bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzahi ak.
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2012, 05:08:35 PM »
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hriday ji shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2012, 04:43:43 PM »
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Bansi jee
Sach me, aapko dhyaan se padhunga mai..
Is peshkash ke ant me aapne jo haasya paida kiya, uska javaab nahee.
Likhte rahiye..accha likha hai aapne...sach likhte hai aap...aur mujhe sach hi pasand hai.
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