Beti bankar aayi hu ma-baap ke jeevan me

by Shalu RV on June 02, 2011, 06:54:15 AM
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Beti bankar aayi hu ma-baap ke jeevan me,
 Basera hoga kal mera kisi aur ke aangan me,
 Kyu ye reet bhagwan ne banai hogi,
 Kehte hai aaj nahi to kal tu parai hogi,
 Deke janam paal-poskar jisne hume bada kiya,
 aur waqt aaya to unhi hatho ne hume vida kiya,
 Tut ke bikhar jati hai humari zindagi wahi,
Par fir bhi us bandhan me pyar mile zaruri to nahi,
Kyu rishata humara itna ajib hota hai,Kya bas yahi betiyo ka nasib Hota hai.....Huh?
 
Par...
 
lakeero ne kismat ko nahi, humne kismat ko banaya hai,
Tabhi toh jaisa jeevan humne chaha,vaisa hi paaya hai,
shaadi ke baad mili hai jinhe khushiya behisaab,
humara naam un sab mein sabse pehle aaya hai.. happy3
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2011, 06:35:44 PM »
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bahut khub
Beti bankar aayi hu ma-baap ke jeevan me,
 Basera hoga kal mera kisi aur ke aangan me,
 Kyu ye reet bhagwan ne banai hogi,
 Kehte hai aaj nahi to kal tu parai hogi,
 Deke janam paal-poskar jisne hume bada kiya,
 aur waqt aaya to unhi hatho ne hume vida kiya,
 Tut ke bikhar jati hai humari zindagi wahi,
Par fir bhi us bandhan me pyar mile zaruri to nahi,
Kyu rishata humara itna ajib hota hai,Kya bas yahi betiyo ka nasib Hota hai.....Huh?
 
Par...
 
lakeero ne kismat ko nahi, humne kismat ko banaya hai,
Tabhi toh jaisa jeevan humne chaha,vaisa hi paaya hai,
shaadi ke baad mili hai jinhe khushiya behisaab,
humara naam un sab mein sabse pehle aaya hai.. happy3
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2011, 08:14:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shalu jee...

It's a real poetry.. Very nice expressions and thoughts ... exclent poetryed.. Usual Smile

Thanks for sharing with us.. Usual Smile
Keep writting... keep posting...
Keep smiling ...
May God bless you ...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2011, 01:43:18 PM »
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Shukriya Parwaz ji.. occasion17
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2011, 02:24:10 PM »
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Beti bankar aayi hu ma-baap ke jeevan me,
 Basera hoga kal mera kisi aur ke aangan me,
 Kyu ye reet bhagwan ne banai hogi,
 Kehte hai aaj nahi to kal tu parai hogi,
 Deke janam paal-poskar jisne hume bada kiya,
 aur waqt aaya to unhi hatho ne hume vida kiya,
 Tut ke bikhar jati hai humari zindagi wahi,
Par fir bhi us bandhan me pyar mile zaruri to nahi,
Kyu rishata humara itna ajib hota hai,Kya bas yahi betiyo ka nasib Hota hai.....Huh?
 
Par...
 
lakeero ne kismat ko nahi, humne kismat ko banaya hai,
Tabhi toh jaisa jeevan humne chaha,vaisa hi paaya hai,
shaadi ke baad mili hai jinhe khushiya behisaab,
humara naam un sab mein sabse pehle aaya hai.. happy3

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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2011, 02:28:35 PM »
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shalu ji…bht khub likha aapne…
aapka subject bht acha hai lekin theame bht me aapne bdlao kar dia aadhe se…
ye soch aur bayani bht achi hai…
aur acha ho sktd tha…
post ko hazaaron daad…

khus rahiye
muskurati rahiye

sukriya
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2011, 03:22:30 PM »
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@ Khwaish ji : Bahut Bahut Shukriya...I am overwhelmed with your words... God Bless you !!
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