DHOOP HE KYON.......

by KOYAL46 on September 09, 2010, 05:16:54 PM
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DHOOP HE KYON…..

Ye poem Jain Sadhvee Kanak Prabha ji ki liki hui hai...

Dhoop he kyon chhav bhi do
Panth he kyon paav bhi do
Safar lamba ho gaya ab,
Theharne ko gaon bhi do

Pyaas he kyon neer bhi do
Dhaar he kyon teer bhi do
Jee rahi pursharth kab se
Ab mujhe takdeer bhi do

Peer he kyon preet bhi do
Haar he kyon jeet bhi do
Shunya me khoye bahut ab
Chetna ko geet bhee do

Granth he kyon gyaan bhi do
Gyaan he kyon dhayaan bhi do
Tum hamaari ashmeeta ko
Ab nij-kee pehchaan bhee do
     ----x------

Aaaj mujhe meri pehchaan do
Mere swabhimaan ko maan b do........koyal


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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2010, 05:28:55 PM »
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bht hi achchi poem hai koyal...hamare aatmvishwas ko badhati ye kavita..zindagi ki sahi paribhasha deti hai....thnx for sharin it wid us Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2010, 08:02:10 PM »
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koyal jee Aadaab!

Humne jab aapki yeh share kii huyi kavita padhna shuru kii tab hume laga ke aapke vichaar kia umdaa hai... aur hum bahut prabhavit bhi huye.....

Per aapne bad meiN likh diya ke yeh kavita humari nahi...
Wel thanks for sharing it... Nice poem....  Usual Smile   
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2010, 08:25:59 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!!

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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2010, 08:27:43 PM »
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nice sharing koyal..its really gud.. Applause Applause  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2010, 12:34:40 AM »
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kavita ke khazaane ka ek naayaab motee..........thanks 4 sharing..
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2010, 04:49:02 PM »
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Nice sharing Koyal Ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2010, 09:26:54 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 09, 2010, 05:16:54 PM
DHOOP HE KYON…..

Ye poem Jain Sadhvee Kanak Prabha ji ki liki hui hai...

Dhoop he kyon chhav bhi do
Panth he kyon paav bhi do
Safar lamba ho gaya ab,
Theharne ko gaon bhi do

Pyaas he kyon neer bhi do
Dhaar he kyon teer bhi do
Jee rahi pursharth kab se
Ab mujhe takdeer bhi do

Peer he kyon preet bhi do
Haar he kyon jeet bhi do
Shunya me khoye bahut ab
Chetna ko geet bhee do

Granth he kyon gyaan bhi do
Gyaan he kyon dhayaan bhi do
Tum hamaari ashmeeta ko
Ab nij-kee pehchaan bhee do
     ----x------

Aaaj mujhe meri pehchaan do
Mere swabhimaan ko maan b do........koyal


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its quite good and touching...
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2011, 07:59:53 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 09, 2010, 05:16:54 PM
DHOOP HE KYON…..

Ye poem Jain Sadhvee Kanak Prabha ji ki liki hui hai...

Dhoop he kyon chhav bhi do
Panth he kyon paav bhi do
Safar lamba ho gaya ab,
Theharne ko gaon bhi do

Pyaas he kyon neer bhi do
Dhaar he kyon teer bhi do
Jee rahi pursharth kab se
Ab mujhe takdeer bhi do

Peer he kyon preet bhi do
Haar he kyon jeet bhi do
Shunya me khoye bahut ab
Chetna ko geet bhee do

Granth he kyon gyaan bhi do
Gyaan he kyon dhayaan bhi do
Tum hamaari ashmeeta ko
Ab nij-kee pehchaan bhee do
     ----x------

Aaaj mujhe meri pehchaan do
Mere swabhimaan ko maan b do........koyal


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nishabd ho gayi main. koyal ji bahut bhauk kavita hai. humein apni pehchan chahiye . bahut achi sharing hai
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2011, 09:34:22 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 09, 2010, 05:16:54 PM
DHOOP HE KYON…..

Ye poem Jain Sadhvee Kanak Prabha ji ki liki hui hai...

Dhoop he kyon chhav bhi do
Panth he kyon paav bhi do
Safar lamba ho gaya ab,
Theharne ko gaon bhi do

Pyaas he kyon neer bhi do
Dhaar he kyon teer bhi do
Jee rahi pursharth kab se
Ab mujhe takdeer bhi do

Peer he kyon preet bhi do
Haar he kyon jeet bhi do
Shunya me khoye bahut ab
Chetna ko geet bhee do

Granth he kyon gyaan bhi do
Gyaan he kyon dhayaan bhi do
Tum hamaari ashmeeta ko
Ab nij-kee pehchaan bhee do
     ----x------

Aaaj mujhe meri pehchaan do
Mere swabhimaan ko maan b do........koyal


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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2011, 09:40:35 AM »
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bahut bahut khoooob!!!

Beautiful Sharing Koyal!!!

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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2011, 09:42:19 AM »
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bahut khub sharing hai koyalji.....
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