Dil mera ghabrata hai

by nandbahu on August 05, 2012, 12:27:09 AM
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Akeley mein jane kyon, dil mera ghabrata hai
Tum jaisa koi sathi ho, toh chain bara tab aata hai

Dil mera jab puchhey, kaun bata tera sathi hai
Mera man nam tera, bus dohraye jata hai

Raton ko neend nahi, jab mujhko aati hai
Tanhaeeyan meri sada, tujhko hi bulati hai

Khawabo mein jab koi, tan ko chhukar jata hai
Meetha dard sa dil mein uthta, ghayal woh kar jata hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2012, 02:53:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob
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ye post bahut acchi hai..bahut improvement bhii.
2nd sher bahut accha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2012, 05:37:29 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2012, 09:06:23 AM »
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धन्यवाद एम् के वी जी, आप जैसे गुणी कवि को मेरी रचना पसंद आई, ऐसी ही हौसला बढ़ाने की आशा रखता हूँ
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2012, 09:06:51 AM »
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धन्यवाद सैनी जी
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 08:07:34 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Nandbahu ji.. khoobsurat ehsaason ke saath khoobsurat rachna ...!!!
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Good Nandbahu ji
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