Gaal Gulaabee, Baal Sunahre, Aur Adaa Men Bholapan****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on June 14, 2011, 04:23:56 PM
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gaal gulaabee, baal sunahre, aur adaa meN bholaapan
mere saaqee kee aaNkheN haiN neelee neelee thodee see
arz karooN kya tumse logo maiN koyee maynosh naheeN
saaqee kee baatoN meN aakar, maine pee lee thodee see

गाल गुलाबी, बाल सुनहरे, और अदा में भोलापन
मेरे साक़ी की आँखें हैं नीली नीली थोड़ी सी
अर्ज़ करूँ क्या तुमसे लोगो, मैं कोई मयनोश नहीं
साक़ी की बातों में आकर, मैंने पी ली थोड़ी सी
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2011, 04:53:00 PM »
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waaaaaah bahoot khoob janab
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2011, 05:04:08 PM »
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MEHFIL MEI WO BENAAB KYA AA GAYA
BIN PIYE HE HEMPE NASHA CHA GAYA
Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 14, 2011, 04:23:56 PM
gaal gulaabee, baal sunahre, aur adaa meN bholaapan
mere saaqee kee aaNkheN haiN neelee neelee thodee see
arz karooN kya tumse logo maiN koyee maynosh naheeN
saaqee kee baatoN meN aakar, maine pee lee thodee see

गाल गुलाबी, बाल सुनहरे, और अदा में भोलापन
मेरे साक़ी की आँखें हैं नीली नीली थोड़ी सी
अर्ज़ करूँ क्या तुमसे लोगो, मैं कोई मयनोश नहीं
साक़ी की बातों में आकर, मैंने पी ली थोड़ी सी
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2011, 06:22:36 PM »
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Aadaab Raqeeb Sahaab !


Kia baat hai janab bade rangeen ashaar kahe hai.. Usual Smile
In dilfareb aur dilnaseeN wars par dil se daad Usual Smile

Ummid hai aapki yeH kalaam jald hi mukammal taur par
nazar nawaaz hoNgi... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Adh khule hoNt, siyaa zulf, gazaali ankheN
Ek HaseeN cheHra tasavur e khayaal hua hai

Lab khamosh, nigaaH chup dhadkane thami thami
Kya kahuN dekh use kya! mera haal hua hai

         
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2011, 06:33:26 PM »
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bekarar sahab,

thanks for reply

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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2011, 06:35:56 PM »
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MANOJ6568 JI,

Thanks for reply...nice she'r

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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2011, 06:41:01 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 14, 2011, 06:35:56 PM
MANOJ6568 JI,

Thanks for reply...nice she'r

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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2011, 06:52:09 PM »
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ParwaaZ Ji...Aadaab,

Jawab dene aur pasand karne ke liye
bahut bahut shukriya.

Jis rang kee baat kahee usee rang men
likhne kee koshish kar raha tha.
 
Aapne jo she'r quote kiye hain woh bhi
bahut achchhe hain.

Haan, ek baat aur yeh Qatah hai aur
apne aap men poora qalaam hai.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2011, 07:07:05 PM »
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YOU R WELCOME MANOJ6568JI

RAQEEB
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2011, 12:29:50 PM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2011, 01:33:40 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 14, 2011, 04:23:56 PM
gaal gulaabee, baal sunahre, aur adaa meN bholaapan
mere saaqee kee aaNkheN haiN neelee neelee thodee see
arz karooN kya tumse logo maiN koyee maynosh naheeN
saaqee kee baatoN meN aakar, maine pee lee thodee see

गाल गुलाबी, बाल सुनहरे, और अदा में भोलापन
मेरे साक़ी की आँखें हैं नीली नीली थोड़ी सी
अर्ज़ करूँ क्या तुमसे लोगो, मैं कोई मयनोश नहीं
साक़ी की बातों में आकर, मैंने पी ली थोड़ी सी


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


       lagayaa  hoton.N se paikar-e-jaam yaad uski aa gayi.
       maiqade ki har bottle mein tasweer uski chaa gayi.
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2011, 01:37:11 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 14, 2011, 06:22:36 PM
Aadaab Raqeeb Sahaab !


Kia baat hai janab bade rangeen ashaar kahe hai.. Usual Smile
In dilfareb aur dilnaseeN wars par dil se daad Usual Smile

Ummid hai aapki yeH kalaam jald hi mukammal taur par
nazar nawaaz hoNgi... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Adh khule hoNt, siyaa zulf, gazaali ankheN
Ek HaseeN cheHra tasavur e khayaal hua hai

Lab khamosh, nigaaH chup dhadkane thami thami
Kya kahuN dekh use kya! mera haal hua hai

         




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raajaindra ji,

Thanks for reply.

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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2011, 05:14:18 PM »
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Janab Bechain Sahab,

Thanks for reading and replying.

Nice she'r you have quoted.
 
Regards,

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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