GHAR

by BANSI DHAMEJA on June 13, 2012, 10:59:18 AM
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GHAR
Ghar banta hai gharwalon se
Na diwaron se na darwazon se
Ghar banta hai gharwalon se

Ek barha sa plot liya
Bahut bara makaan banaya

Age angan peechhe angan
Perh paudhe khoob lagaye

Bahut mazboot deewaren banaen
Bultproof darwaze lagay

Bare bare shayankaksh banaye
Jhoomar lieton se sajaye

Bahar ka paint aisa tha
Chand ki chandi men
Cham cham chamakta tha

Magzinon men photo chapte
Akhbaron men charche hote
Door door se log use dekhne atey

Par kisi karanwash koie rahne nahin ayaa
Band parha raha kaei salon se
Bhar gaya makree ke jalon se

Ghar banta hai gharwalon se
Na diwaron se na darwazon se
Ghar banta hai gharwalon se

Makan chahe barha kiyon na ho
Bahutse log usmen rahte hon

Bhaee ka dushman bhaee ho
Nak charhee bhaojaee ho

Barhon ki izat hotee na ho
Chhotonko pyar milta na ho

Hamdardee ka dard na ho
Kiseeko kiseeki kadar na ho

Property ko lekar jhagrhe hon
Har bat men apas men ragrhe hon

Harek ko apnee parhee rahti ho
Kisi ko isi ki khabar na ho
Ghar nahin kahlayega

Mashahoor hojayga afsano se

Ghar banta hai gharwalon se
Na diwaron se na darwazon se
Ghar banta hai gharwalon se

Makan chahe chhota kiyon na ho
Usmen do ya das rahte hon
Lekin pyaar se rahte hon
 
Choat ek ko lagtee ho
Dard auron ko hota ho

Rookhee sookhee khakar bhi
Chain ki need se sote hon

Ghar wohi kahlayega
Bhagwan bhi wohin rahna chahega

Ghar banta hai gharwalon se
Na diwaron se na darwazon se
Ghar banta hai gharwalon se

Apna ghar agar ghar nheen hai to
Ghar usko apna banalo

Sath men rahnewalon ko
Pyarse rahna sabko sikhado

Kya rakha hai jhagron men
Pyaar barha lo apas men

Bhedbhaw sare mita ke
Sabko apne gale laga ke
Apna ek chhotasa swarg banalo

Kiya maloom kab kaun gharee
Uska bulawa ajayega

Jis ke liye bhi larte hain ham
Sab yaheen rah jayega

Rahjayengi yadeyen peechhe
Kuchh khatee khuchh meethee

Agar to yaden achhee hongi
Yad karenge achhey se

Ghar banta hai gharwalon se
Na diwaron se na darwazon se
Ghar banta hai gharwalon se
----bansi dhameja(madhur)

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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 11:01:46 AM »
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a very inspiring long poem
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 11:05:24 AM »
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badee gharaai liye hue hai aapkee kawitaa main aapko saadhuwaad detaa hoon aur ek rau bhee
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 11:07:51 AM »
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hemanshu ji shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 11:11:27 AM »
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saini ji aap ko achhi lagi yeh mere liye kaafi hai. apka bahut bahut abhhaari hun. Thanks
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 12:11:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai bansi jee aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2012, 02:41:33 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahutb khoob likha hai aapne Bansi ji...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2012, 05:22:46 PM »
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ahha  bahut hi khub vicharo se susajit kavita..... dhero daad  aur badhai....aur ek rau bhi

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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2012, 05:32:23 PM »
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bohot umdaa sir ... khoob likha sir ..
dheerooon daad
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 06:08:29 PM »
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saudagar ji  bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzahi ka
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2012, 06:50:17 PM »
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roy ji shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2012, 08:42:51 AM »
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hemanshu ji shukriya
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