GUZARISH

by guddurampuri on January 05, 2011, 07:34:16 AM
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Baadlo se aab baras rha tha,
aur wo bahar jaane ko taras rha tha,
humne kaha na jao,par uska to rom rom kalakh rha tha,
paani ruk chuka tha,fakat guzarish hamari thi,
aapki mohabbat m khuda bhi humse haarke hans rha tha...
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2011, 08:04:49 AM »
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wah wah Rampoori ji.
kya kamaal likha bhai.
bahut khoob.
swagat aapka aate rahiye aur iss jagah ko apne nagmo se gulzaar karte rahiye.
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2011, 08:07:57 AM »
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acche khyaal hain raampuri ji..
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2011, 08:09:43 AM »
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nice lines
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2011, 08:19:14 AM »
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Guzaarish hai bas itni si
     ke bas Chaand taare tod lau do chaar...hehehe
kya khayal hai bhai.
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2011, 08:36:52 AM »
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good gudduji...

bahut achchhe.. likhte rahie..

khush rahie
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2011, 09:28:30 AM »
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Nice
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guddurampuri
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2011, 05:12:08 PM »
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thanks...mai aapko tahedil se shukriya ada karta hu
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2011, 02:59:41 PM »
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wah waah guddu ji
aapne to mazaa dila diya.
yo india mein welcome.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2011, 06:19:48 PM »
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wat a movie its amejing.....realy i like it
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