KASH KI KISMAT....INJURED.WARRIOR

by injured.warrior on December 22, 2011, 06:28:20 PM
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KASH KI KISMAT ME, KOI HUMNAVAN HOTA
TO EK AFASANA MERA BHI, JAWAN HOTA

MAIN AAJ BHI HU WAHIN, JAHA KAL TAK THA.. MAIN KHADA
KOI THAM LETA JO HAATH , TO NA JAANE AAJ KAHA HOTA

HOTI KISE KE NOOR-E-ISHQ SE MERI BHI RAAHEN, ROSHAN
TO PAL PAL ME BASA YE ANDHERA, KAHA HOTA

TOOT JAATA SITAARE SA, USKI EK KHWAHISH PAR
USKE HI NAAM PAR MAIN TO YUN, FANA HOTA

WO PANNA MOHABAAT KA, NAHI MERI KITAB ME.. DOSTO
WARNA KISSA MERA BHI, DUNIYA KI ZUBAANI BAYAN HOTA

NA FIRTA ZINDAGI ME, TANHA YUN.. "WARRIOR"
AGAR KAHI, KOI MERA.. YAHA HOTA,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 06:47:15 PM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal.Mubarakbad hazir hai.
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2011, 06:50:36 PM »
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shukriya Qais ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2011, 02:30:25 AM »
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good
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2011, 03:08:35 AM »
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baht ache janaab--
ehsaason ki bayani bht khoob rahi
daad daad
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2011, 03:33:52 AM »
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khub I.W ji
Bahut khub ehsas byaan kiya hai

 Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2011, 04:25:27 AM »
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warrior ji bahut achhaa kahaa aapne par agar ye ghazal hai to do baaten khatak rahee hain 1. lafz "yahaan vahaan kahaaN" ese likho 2.fanaa qafiyaa yahaaN fit naheeN hotaa. aapee rachnaa beshaq shaandaar hai mubaarak ho
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2011, 03:06:23 PM »
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MKV ji. Sarfira ji, Sanjeev ji, Saini ji Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya... notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2011, 03:09:08 PM »
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warrior ji bahut achhaa kahaa aapne par agar ye ghazal hai to do baaten khatak rahee hain 1. lafz "yahaan vahaan kahaaN" ese likho 2.fanaa qafiyaa yahaaN fit naheeN hotaa. aapee rachnaa beshaq shaandaar hai mubaarak ho
Saini ji hum aapki seekh pe agli post se hi amal karenge...
haan Lafzo ke chunao me itne pakke nahi hain hum magar ,aisa hi aap log hume sikhate rahenge to zaroor seekh jaayenge aur umda likhne lagenge
abhi to dil me aay likh dete hai..
A Lot OF Thanks To  tell me About Mistakes..Thanks a lot Sir.
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2011, 04:06:39 PM »
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very good
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2011, 06:01:25 AM »
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shukriya Suneel Ji
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