lafz lafz dard kaa samandar hai...............Mamta Bajpai

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Jisko dekho hisaab maaNge hai
soonee aaNkhoN se khwaab maaNge hai

charchaa uskaa galee galee pahuNchaa
husn ab to hijaab maaNge hai

uljhe uljhe sawaal haiN uske
mujhse seedhaa jawaab maaNge hai

khud kee neeyat me khot hai jiske
woh wafaa behisaab maaNge hai

barhaman khud ko kahne waalaa bhee
chhup ke boti kabaab maaNge hai

sookhaa saavan gayaa hai bhaadoNbhee
kyuN tu patjhad se aab maaNge hai

lafz lafz dard kaa samandar hai
ik nazar ye kitaab maaNge hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2013, 05:17:54 PM »
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Jisko dekho hisaab maaNge hai
soonee aaNkhoN se khwaab maaNge hai

charchaa uskaa galee galee pahuNchaa
husn ab to hijaab maaNge hai

uljhe uljhe sawaal haiN uske
mujhse seedhaa jawaab maaNge hai

khud kee neeyat me khot hai jiske
woh wafaa behisaab maaNge hai

barhaman khud ko kahne waalaa bhee
chhup ke boti kabaab maaNge hai

sookhaa saavan gayaa hai bhaadoNbhee
kyuN tu patjhad se aab maaNge hai

lafz lafz dard kaa samandar hai
ik nazar ye kitaab maaNge hai

Mamta Bajpai


Mamta jee aapne bahut bahut acha ghazal likha hai. bahut bahut daad Thumbs UP

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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2013, 05:19:47 PM »
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shukriyaah Suman jee!
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2013, 05:37:21 PM »
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Lajawab,,,,,Bahut Achi Gazal Hai,,,,, Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause ApplauseThanks.
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2013, 05:38:21 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut shaandaar waapsee mubarak ho ek rau bhee
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2013, 05:39:10 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaah Janaab!
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2013, 05:40:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause
 khubsurat ghazal . congrats.
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2013, 06:13:30 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause




waaaaah buht achi umdaaaaa ghazal
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2013, 06:31:47 PM »
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Jisko dekho hisaab maaNge hai
soonee aaNkhoN se khwaab maaNge hai

charchaa uskaa galee galee pahuNchaa
husn ab to hijaab maaNge hai

uljhe uljhe sawaal haiN uske
mujhse seedhaa jawaab maaNge hai

khud kee neeyat me khot hai jiske
woh wafaa behisaab maaNge hai

barhaman khud ko kahne waalaa bhee
chhup ke boti kabaab maaNge hai

sookhaa saavan gayaa hai bhaadoNbhee
kyuN tu patjhad se aab maaNge hai

lafz lafz dard kaa samandar hai
ik nazar ye kitaab maaNge hai

Mamta Bajpai


wah wah wah wah kya baat hai kya baat hai jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai is mukammal ghazal ki.



Jisko dekho hisaab maaNge hai

soonee aaNkhoN se khwaab maaNge hai

lajwab matala hai
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2013, 09:07:48 PM »
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Jisko dekho hisaab maaNge hai
soonee aaNkhoN se khwaab maaNge hai

charchaa uskaa galee galee pahuNchaa
husn ab to hijaab maaNge hai

uljhe uljhe sawaal haiN uske
mujhse seedhaa jawaab maaNge hai

khud kee neeyat me khot hai jiske
woh wafaa behisaab maaNge hai

barhaman khud ko kahne waalaa bhee
chhup ke boti kabaab maaNge hai

sookhaa saavan gayaa hai bhaadoNbhee
kyuN tu patjhad se aab maaNge hai

lafz lafz dard kaa samandar hai
ik nazar ye kitaab maaNge hai

Mamta Bajpai


bahut khoob mamta ji.................!
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2013, 09:10:55 PM »
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waah waah , bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2013, 09:24:21 PM »
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Waaah waaah Mamta Ji...bahut khoob...mubaarak ho aur is
she'r par khusoosee daad qubool farmaayen.....

uljhe uljhe sawaal haiN uske
mujhse seedhaa jawaab maaNge hai

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2013, 09:37:52 PM »
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bohat khoob,............bohat c daad,...........
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2013, 10:55:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob. dheron daad
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2013, 11:38:56 AM »
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