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by AVTAR RAYAT on December 17, 2010, 04:21:49 AM
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**MAA**

Ek Din Maa Ne Paas Bulaya
Maatha Chooma Gale Lagaya

Laddu Khilaya Sharbat Pilaya,
Mera Bachpan Yaad Dilaya,

Poochhi Maa Ne Ek Din Ki Kamayi,
Khushi Se Maine Dugani Bataayi,

Boodhi Maa Ne Chupi Todi,
Sandook Se Lakar Gullak Phodi,

Chillar Note Se Bhar Ke Jholi
Aaasu Apne Rok Ke Boli,

Ye Rakh Le Meri Barso Ki Bachat,
Ise Ek Din Ki Kamaayi Samjh,

De Badle Mein Ek Din Apna
Yahi Hai Mera Aakhri Sapna,
Beta,,,,
Ye Hi Hai Mera Aakhri Sapna...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2010, 04:26:01 AM »
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behad umda likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2010, 05:57:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob Avtar Ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2010, 08:14:36 AM »
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Aaj k yug k beto ki sachchayi aur ek maa ka dard aapne simple shabdon mai darshaya hai Avtar ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jis maa ne barson khilaaya apni god mai
Aaj uss maa se baat karne ka samay nahi

Uljhan hai kamaane ki ya Bibi sang mauj manaane ki
Maa ki aankhein tou tarasti hain bete k deedaar ko


**MAA**

Ek Din Maa Ne Paas Bulaya
Maatha Chooma Gale Lagaya

Laddu Khilaya Sharbat Pilaya,
Mera Bachpan Yaad Dilaya,

Poochhi Maa Ne Ek Din Ki Kamayi,
Khushi Se Maine Dugani Bataayi,

Boodhi Maa Ne Chupi Todi,
Sandook Se Lakar Gullak Phodi,

Chillar Note Se Bhar Ke Jholi
Aaasu Apne Rok Ke Boli,

Ye Rakh Le Meri Barso Ki Bachat,
Ise Ek Din Ki Kamaayi Samjh,

De Badle Mein Ek Din Apna
Yahi Hai Mera Aakhri Sapna,
Beta,,,,
Ye Hi Hai Mera Aakhri Sapna...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT

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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2010, 08:56:47 AM »
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Bahut-Bahut Shukria....
Aiina Ji...
Rajesh Ji...
KoyaL JI...

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