Maa....

by kritika sharma on December 15, 2011, 03:42:04 PM
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Is Badhe shahar ki Bheed se dar lagta hai Maa,
Raste par karte waq Tere hath ka sahara yaad aata hai Maa,
In khali kamron ki diwron me Harpal,
Teri tasveer dhunti rehti hun maa,
Man karta hai Ghar luat aaun Maa,
Par ..phir Tera sapna yaad aa jata hai Maa,
Shayad ye soch kar hi yaha ruk jati hun Maa,
Tu kese sah leti hai mujhse dooriyan Maa,
Akhir kyon tu mere baare me itna sochti hai Maa,
Mere bhavishy ke liye tu itna dukh kese sah leti hai Maa,
Meri Shakti ..Mera vishvash hai tu Maa,
Tere liye Kuch ban ke dikhungi Maa,
Jitne gham sahe hai Tune jaamne ke mere liye Maa,
Uthni hi Khushiyan teri raahoin me laa kar dikhaungi Maa.
love u mamma this 4 u :D icon_flower
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2011, 04:00:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob kritika.
I know how deeply u love ur mamma..Great..
Love, dedication, responsibility, care full of feelings..
Taare zameen par ka vo song yaad aa raha hai. jo aksar mujhe rula deta hai. TUJHE SAB KUCH PATA HAI..
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2011, 04:02:24 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 15, 2011, 04:00:46 PM
Bahut khoob kritika.
I know how deeply u love ur mamma..Great..
Love, dedication, responsibility, care full of feelings..
Taare zameen par ka vo song yaad aa raha hai. jo aksar mujhe rula deta hai. TUJHE SAB KUCH PATA HAI..



thanks u actually me wahi song sun rahi thi tab to aanshu aa gye nd tabhi mene ye likha the ..... thnks u mkv ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2011, 04:09:34 PM »
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Quote from: kritika sharma on December 15, 2011, 03:42:04 PM
Is Badhe shahar ki Bheed se dar lagta hai Maa,
Raste par karte waq Tere hath ka sahara yaad aata hai Maa,
In khali kamron ki diwron me Harpal,
Teri tasveer dhunti rehti hun maa,
Man karta hai Ghar luat aaun Maa,
Par ..phir Tera sapna yaad aa jata hai Maa,
Shayad ye soch kar hi yaha ruk jati hun Maa,
Tu kese sah leti hai mujhse dooriyan Maa,
Akhir kyon tu mere baare me itna sochti hai Maa,
Mere bhavishy ke liye tu itna dukh kese sah leti hai Maa,
Meri Shakti ..Mera vishvash hai tu Maa,
Tere liye Kuch ban ke dikhungi Maa,
Jitne gham sahe hai Tune jaamne ke mere liye Maa,
Uthni hi Khushiyan teri raahoin me laa kar dikhaungi Maa.
love u mamma this 4 u :D icon_flower


Super Creation, Hat's Off to you Usual Smile
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2011, 07:23:28 PM »
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K S jee Aadaab!

Nice thought's .. Very touchi expression ...
You wrote it nicely.. Usual Smile

Keep writting keep posting,
May GOD bless you ..Usual Smile
   
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injured.warrior
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2011, 07:38:17 PM »
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a beutiful lines with a beutiful promise...
may god bless all you want for you mother...nice and toching Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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janu007
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2011, 04:57:04 AM »
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nice thoughts and beautifull lines.............
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imcool_hi
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2011, 06:32:41 AM »
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आपने तो रूला ही दिया।
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2011, 10:57:43 AM »
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bahut hi khub ,,,every word is very imotional and direct from the bottom of the  heart,,,keep continue your never ending thoughts ,,,nayab likha hai ...dheroon daad kabul karein ....khuda hafiz 
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kritika sharma
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2011, 11:19:29 AM »
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thank u so much everyone ..:D
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shad
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«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2011, 07:44:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut he pyare Alfaaz ..Daad qabool karen
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