maikhana aabad kar saqii

by soudagar on October 29, 2012, 04:11:34 AM
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chal chal ke phir se maikhana aabad kar saqi,
 jo ishq mein bach gaye, unhe tu barbad kar saqi..

yeh khudaa to ab shayad kismatwalon ka ho chuka,
 tu hum badnaseebo ke liye nayaa izaad kar saqiii...

gam to gam hi hotein hain,mere kyar aur uske kyaa,
 tu ek nazar daal ke puri sabki fariyaad kar saqii..

 din  bhar hosh ki girafat mein dum ghuta ghuta sa raha,
 ghunt do peela kar, rooh ko thodaa aazad kar saqii....

 do pal sath rah ke tu ehsaan  jatana nahi bhula jab
 main kitna muntazir hoon, zra yeh bhi to yaad kar saqi..
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2012, 12:42:26 PM »
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bahut badiya saudagar ji, mujhe to puri gazal padne mein maja aaya bahut khoob likha hai badhaai kubool karen
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Quote from: soudagar on October 29, 2012, 04:11:34 AM
chal chal ke phir se maikhana aabad kar saqi,
 jo ishq mein bach gaye, unhe tu barbad kar saqi.. Applause Applause Applause

yeh khudaa to ab shayad kismatwalon ka ho chuka,
 tu hum badnaseebo ke liye nayaa izaad kar saqiii... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

gam to gam hi hotein hain,mere kyaa aur uske kyaa,
 tu ek nazar daal ke puri sabki fariyaad kar saqii.. Applause Applause Applause

 din  bhar hosh ki girafat mein dum ghuta ghuta sa raha,
 ghunt do peela kar, rooh ko thodaa aazad kar saqii.... Applause Applause Applause

 do pal sath rah ke tu ehsaan  jatana nahi bhula jab
 main kitna muntazir hoon, zra yeh bhi to yaad kar saqi..
Applause Applause
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wah wah wah bahut badhiya....... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya GD Ahuja ji
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