MAN MEN RAAM BASA LE MAN MADIR BAN JAYEGA......bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on June 20, 2012, 04:44:18 PM
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MAN MEN RAAM BASA LE MAN MADIR BAN JAYEGA
JO SUKOON MANDIR MEN MILE WO HI MAN MEN AYEGA
MAN MEN RAAM BASA LE MAN MADIR BAN JAYEGA

MAN MEN RAAM KI JYOT JALA LE UJALA HO JAYEGA
UJALA HO JAYEGA ADHIYARA MIT AJYEGA
JITNA MAIL CHHUPA HAI MAN MEN SAB DIKHNE LAG JAYEGA
JAB MAN KA MAIL DHO LENGE MAN NIRMAL HO JAYEGA
MAN NIRMAL HO JAYEGA PARAM ANAND MIL JAYEGA

MAN MEN RAAM BASA LE MAN MADIR BAN JAYEGA
JO SUKOON MANDIR MEN MILE WO HI MAN MEN AYEGA
MAN MEN RAAM BASA LE MAN MADIR BAN JAYEGA
----bansi dhameja(madhur)
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 04:47:18 PM »
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bansi ji  bahut hi khub bahut hi achha geet likha aapne......dhero daad aur jo rachna bahut hi achhi ho uske liye ek hi tarika sahi hai samman dene ke liye.........

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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2012, 04:49:19 PM »
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SAUDAGAR JI BAHUT ACHHA LAGA APKE CCOMMENTS PARH KAR .
SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2012, 04:57:33 PM »
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bohot khhob kha hai sir bilkul sahi baat hai !!
Applause Applause

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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2012, 05:01:38 PM »
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THANKS ROY JI
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2012, 05:07:43 PM »
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Ram ram kee rat..
vaaah.,,,khush rahe..
khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2012, 05:10:53 PM »
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ROY JI SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2012, 12:18:27 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2012, 10:24:00 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2012, 05:14:55 PM »
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saini ji shulriya
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2012, 05:20:11 PM »
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bansi ji mujhe nahi pata ki aur shayaro ki nazar mein yeh rachna is qabil hai ya nahi par mujhe lagta hai ki maine apna pehla  rau best rachna ko diya hai ....aur main isse satisfied hoon.....ab agar rau ka mahtav  bahut jyada raha to mujhe is rau par fkr hoga....
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2012, 06:14:27 PM »
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SAUDAGAR JI SHUKRIYA APKA ADAA KARAT HOON MAIN
MERA HAUSILA ISKADAR BARHANE KE LIYE
LIKHNE KI KOSHISH KARTA RAHOONGA MAIN
YO INDIA PE APNE SAB DOSTON KE LIYE

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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2012, 02:51:02 AM »
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bahut achchhi rachna hai bansi jee. dheron daad.
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2012, 02:53:10 AM »
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bansi jee bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2012, 03:18:04 AM »
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MASUM JI BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIY

JAB MERA LIKHA DOSTON KO ACHHAA LAGE
DIL SE KAHITA HOON BAHUT ACHHAA LAGE MUJHE
KARTA HUN SHUKR MAIN US PARVARDIGAR KA
JISNE DIYA  HAI HAUSILA KUCHH  LIKHNE KA MUJHE
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