meri yadon ke...............

by soudagar on August 06, 2012, 05:38:46 PM
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meri yadon ke charago ko jala kar roya
apne dil mein wo khud aag laga kar roya

zindgi dhundh raha tha wo deewane ki tarah
wo meri lash mein khanjar ko chubha kar roya

dil mein benaam sa ek dard liye barso tak
wo meri kabr pe phulon ko chadha kar royaa

kisi ne puchh liya jab  bhi udasi ka sabab
wo zamane se har ek baat chhupa kar royaa

jab bhi tanhai mein yadon ki chali bochharein
apne majhi ko wo seene se lagaa kar royaa..

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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 05:49:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
bahut jabardast Ghajal inaayat kee hai.
kya baat hai.
meri yadon ke charago ko jala kar roya
apne dil mein wo khud aag laga kar roya   Applause Applause Applause

zindgi dhundh raha tha wo deewane ki tarah
wo meri lash mein khanjar ko chubha kar roya  MAAR DAALA..KYA BAAT HAI

dil mein benaam sa ek dard liye barso tak
wo meri kabr pe phulon ko chadha kar royaa  WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

kisi ne puchh liya jab  bhi udasi ka sabab
wo zamane se har ek baat chhupa kar royaa  bAHUT KHOOB...KYA BAAT HAI

jab bhi tanhai mein yadon ki chali bochharein
apne majhi ko wo seene se lagaa kar royaa..  VAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH


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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 06:07:42 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob soudagar ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 09:44:37 PM »
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meri yadon ke charago ko jala kar roya
apne dil mein wo khud aag laga kar roya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

zindgi dhundh raha tha wo deewane ki tarah
wo meri lash mein khanjar ko chubha kar roya  icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

dil mein benaam sa ek dard liye barso tak
wo meri kabr pe phulon ko chadha kar royaa  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kisi ne puchh liya jab  bhi udasi ka sabab
wo zamane se har ek baat chhupa kar royaa Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

jab bhi tanhai mein yadon ki chali bochharein
apne majhi ko wo seene se lagaa kar royaa.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 11:37:21 PM »
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Wah wah bahut umda likha hai, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2012, 03:34:33 AM »
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waah saudagar bhai
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2012, 05:27:19 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji... bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2012, 07:33:51 AM »
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very very nice Soudagar ji....kya likh dia aapne...ekdam ye dard rooh tak pahucha hai...bahot hi sundar...
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bahut khub.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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