meri zindagi

by pritam tripathi on August 25, 2012, 08:39:46 AM
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kyun rakhun main apni kalam me shyahi,
jab arman koi dil me machalta hi nahi,
pata nahi kyun log shaq karte hain mujhpe,
jab shukha phool kitabon me milta hi nahi,
kashish to bahut hain humare pyar me magar kya kare,
jab koi pathar dil pighalta hi nahi,
agar khuda milega to usse pyar mangunga magar suna hai,
marne se pahle kisi se woh milta hi nahi,
dosti me jaan dene ka vaada hum karte hain,
magar dost mera koi banta hi nahi,
sochta hoon is tan ko jalakar khaak kar doon,
magar kya karun aasuon ki baarish main ye tan jalta hi nahi,
kitabe to bahut si padh lete hain duniyawale,
magar 'PRITAM' k dil ko koi padhta hi nahi,
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2012, 03:33:38 PM »
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wah wah pritam jee
bahut badhiya likha hai aapne. last me to veri touching..kaun na mar jaaye aisee shikaayat par. Applause Applause
aap aate bhi kam hai. thoda fq badhaiye.
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2012, 03:42:20 PM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2012, 05:00:33 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2012, 12:39:52 PM »
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saini ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2012, 12:40:23 PM »
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sahil ji bahut bahut dhanyawad
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2012, 12:44:02 PM »
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mkv ji bahut bahut shukriya sarahane ke liye
main kosis karta hoon humesha aane ki magar aisa ho nahi pata hai jab bhi akele hota hoon to aa jata hoon aur aap logon ko padhta rehta hoon to bahut hi accha lagta hai aur aap hi logon ki wajah se hi likhne ki kosis karta hoon aur ab to aisa agta hai ki yoindia bhi mera ek pariwar ho gaya hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2012, 08:16:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob Pritam ji... par lag raha hai ye maine pehle kahin padhaa huwa hai... yaad nahi aa raha kahan...Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 11:28:53 PM »
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sir jarror padhi hogi maine jab yoindia join kiya tha to meri pehli post me se ek thi
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2012, 05:22:47 AM »
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Topic moved to Poetry Lounge:
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