*Mujhe Le Chal Wahan*

by malli on March 02, 2010, 02:02:16 PM
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Mujhe le chal wahan
Aaj bhi Insaan Insaniyat ki
Zindagi jeete ho jahan..

Mujhe le chal wahan
Aaj bhi Maa-Baap ki khushi mein
Apni khushi log samajte ho jahan..

Mujhe le chal wahan
Aaj bhi ek doosre ke dukh sukh mein
Log kaam aate ho jahan..

Mujhe le chal wahan
Jahan her mazhab ke log sab ka
Malik ek hai maan ker
Ek hi chhat ke neeche her naam se
Malik ko yaad karte ho jahan..


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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2010, 03:23:35 PM »
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Very nice sharing Roja dear...
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2010, 03:29:07 PM »
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Behna Agar Yeh Poetry aapne share ki hai To ek Sujhaav Dena Cahunga Jisne bhi yeh likha hai ,  iss Poetry Mein bhi ek bhi sher Sahi Leh Mein nahi hai..Jisne bhi yeh likha hai usse abhi aur koshish karni chahiye..

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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2010, 03:33:29 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 02, 2010, 03:29:07 PM
Behna Agar Yeh Poetry aapne share ki hai To ek Sujhaav Dena Cahunga Jisne bhi yeh likha hai ,  iss Poetry Mein bhi ek bhi sher Sahi Leh Mein nahi hai..Jisne bhi yeh likha hai usse abhi aur koshish karni chahiye..

Shukriya

thanks bhaiya aapne pada.... aur jisne likha hmmm pata nahi bhaiya but mujhe to sahi laga tha... i mean leh etc... thanks for your lovely advice  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2010, 03:37:16 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 02, 2010, 03:23:35 PM
Very nice sharing Roja dear...

Thanks sweet lady  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2010, 03:37:58 PM »
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Quote from: malli on March 02, 2010, 03:33:29 PM
thanks bhaiya aapne pada.... aur jisne likha hmmm pata nahi bhaiya but mujhe to sahi laga tha... i mean leh etc... thanks for your lovely advice  Usual Smile

Chaliye,Maan lete hai Apni-Apni Soch Aur Pasand Ki Baat Hai!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2010, 03:50:10 PM »
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yeh Jo poetry Aapne Share Ki hai Yeh Poetry Caraji Ne Meri hi thread mein Likhi Hai..

"Mujhe Le Chal "Khwaish" Ke Naam Se...

Jo Aapne Phir yahan likh Di...Jab Aapko Pata Hai Ke Woh cara Ji Ne Likha To Kam se Kam Aap Poet ka naam saath mein likhte..
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2010, 04:14:57 PM »
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It's a bit of situation here !

Mujhe padh ke laga tha ki maine kahin padha hai aur isiliye Nice Sharing likha magar ye pata nahin tha ki ye poem Cara Ji ki hai jinhone Khwaish ke thread main ye likha tha....Ironically, I completely forgot that Khwaish himself wrote such a beautiful poem originally, just two days back (please forgive me; I am not myself these days) !!

I did 'nt know ki Yoindia se poems itni jaldi doosri sites pe chali jaati hain  icon_geek
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2010, 04:22:25 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 02, 2010, 04:14:57 PM
It's a bit of situation here !

Mujhe padh ke laga tha ki maine kahin padha hai aur isiliye Nice Sharing likha magar ye pata nahin tha ki ye poem Cara Ji ki hai jinhone Khwaish ke thread main ye likha tha....Ironically, I completely forgot that Khwaish himself wrote that such a beautiful poem (please forgive me; I am not myself these days) !!

I did 'nt know ki Yoindia se poems itni jaldi doosri sites pe chali jaati hain  icon_geek

Dear Talat, Plz Don't say Sorry For such A Small Thing..

Bas,Mujhe Afsos Iss Baat ka Hai Ke Yeh Poetry Agar Share bhi karni thi to Share Section mein jaate aur isse post karte...

Koi jaan=Bujhkar Ussi Section mein yeh post kare jahan par already yeh posted hai..Mere Samaj Ke baahar hai..

Khuda Ka Shukar Hai Ke yeh Poetry cara Ne Mere hi thread mein Likhi Hai

Varna Shayad Aaj Khwaish Ko Log CHOR Kehte..
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2010, 05:23:58 PM »
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BEHATREEN MALII JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2010, 05:33:47 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 02, 2010, 03:50:10 PM
yeh Jo poetry Aapne Share Ki hai Yeh Poetry Caraji Ne Meri hi thread mein Likhi Hai..

"Mujhe Le Chal "Khwaish" Ke Naam Se...

Jo Aapne Phir yahan likh Di...Jab Aapko Pata Hai Ke Woh cara Ji Ne Likha To Kam se Kam Aap Poet ka naam saath mein likhte..

Bhai.. bas yahan aur na behas kare. Yeh unhone likha ye yaad nahi aaya tha mujhe. Plz is baat ko yahi rehne do. Nice lines and mera dil k aur dimak k bahut kareeb hai jo line yahan post ki gayi hai.
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2010, 05:35:57 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 02, 2010, 04:22:25 PM
Dear Talat, Plz Don't say Sorry For such A Small Thing..

Bas,Mujhe Afsos Iss Baat ka Hai Ke Yeh Poetry Agar Share bhi karni thi to Share Section mein jaate aur isse post karte...

Koi jaan=Bujhkar Ussi Section mein yeh post kare jahan par already yeh posted hai..Mere Samaj Ke baahar hai..

Khuda Ka Shukar Hai Ke yeh Poetry cara Ne Mere hi thread mein Likhi Hai

Varna Shayad Aaj Khwaish Ko Log CHOR Kehte..

bhai khwaish, mai jaan-bujhkar is section mein post nahi ki. hame pata nahi tha and yaad bi nahi raha. isliye hum mafi chahte hai ke ek acchi poem ko share karne se yahan aapke dil ko dukhi kar diya hai humne. Sorry onceagain
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2010, 07:36:02 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

Thanx!
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2010, 05:46:24 AM »
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"mujhe le chal waha"bahot khooob!
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2010, 02:33:40 PM »
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EK HI PARIVAR KE TOH HAM SABI "YO" KE LOG HAI YAHAN
WO KAUNSA PARIVAR HAI AAPAS MEIN JAGDA NAHIN HOTA JAHAN
HAI KOI IS DUNIYA MEIN JO "MUJHE LE CHALE WAHAN"
CHOTI MOTI TAKRAR NA HO SIRF KHUSHIYAN HO JAHAN....

AISI CHOTI MOTI BAATEN AKSAR HOTI RAHETI HAI
KOI BHI APNE DIL PE NA LEY MEHFIL CHALTI RAHE...
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