naseehat

by pritam tripathi on December 13, 2012, 08:00:27 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 886 times)
pritam tripathi
Guest
Reply with quote
rahegi dua uski mere sar par hamesha
woh bujurg tha mera jo mujhe samjhaya karta tha
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Ek Naseehat.. by Azeem Azaad in Share:Miscellaneous Shayari
CIC
Guest
«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 08:59:31 PM »
Reply with quote
Do do line likh kar shayari keh rahe ho,

Yeh toh sher hain, ghazal bhi banayiye toh kuch accha lage.

Aapke paas toh title bhi nahi hote, aapki apni shayari bhi post kariye zara.
Logged
pritam tripathi
Guest
«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 09:42:57 PM »
Reply with quote
rhytmic line ko main title nahi manta hoon aur asli title mere pass nahi rehte hain to jo sahi me poetry hoti hai aur shyari hoti hai use wahi naam de deta hoon
doosri cheej dil se likhta hoon kabhi ye sochkar nahi likhta hoon ki kitna likhna hai ya kisi ko dikhana hai aur ek baat apna likhta hoon bhai doosre ka nahi
baaki aap samjhdaar hain jo bhi title sahi lage wahi samjh ke padh liya kijiye
Logged
CIC
Guest
«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 09:56:17 PM »
Reply with quote
Toh aap ye keh rahi hai yeh sher aapne likha hai, aapne keh diya aur humne maan liya.
Shukriya Jawaab dene ka..

Ab ye batayen ki Shayari kar lete hain per title banane ka hunar nahi aapke paas ?

Kuch virodhabhaas sa mehsus hota hai..
Logged
pritam tripathi
Guest
«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 10:05:17 PM »
Reply with quote
jo bhi aap socho aap apne vichaar ke liye swatantr ho

main apni lekhni ke liye swatantr hoon
Logged
roy
Guest
«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2012, 06:59:11 AM »
Reply with quote
cic sir u seem to b rude .....
n thats ain't cool


anyhow pritam sir good lines Usual Smile
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2012, 07:21:15 AM »
Reply with quote
waah
Logged
pritam tripathi
Guest
«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2012, 06:43:16 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: roy on December 14, 2012, 06:59:11 AM
cic sir u seem to b rude .....
n thats ain't cool


anyhow pritam sir good lines Usual Smile

thanks roy ji
Logged
pritam tripathi
Guest
«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2012, 06:43:48 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: sksaini4 on December 14, 2012, 07:21:15 AM
waah
saini ji thanks
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Poetry Launge > Share Poetry You Like > Share:Miscellaneous Shayari > Topic: naseehat
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 23, 2024, 11:43:42 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.085 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer