***Paise Bagair Rishte***

by AVTAR RAYAT on May 19, 2010, 06:09:47 AM
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Aye Khuda,,,

Teri Dunia Mein Mohabat Ka Nishaan Milta Nahi
Har Koyi Jaha'n Matlavi Hai...Insaan Dikhta Nahi,

Koyi Ab Dunia Mein Sachaayi Ko Nahi Poochhta,
Koyi Aisa Nahi, Jo Immaan Ke Liye Bikta Nahi,

Jaha'n Sabhi Rishte Ab Paiso Se Dilo Ko Tolte Hein,
Ab To Baago Ke Phool Bhi...Paiso'n Bagair Khilta Nahi

Har Rishta Jaise Paise Par Aakar Ruk Gaya...
Laachaar Aadmi Paise Ke Aage Jhuk Gaya,

Aaj Ki Biwi Bhi Pehle Bank Balance Dekhti Hai
Usey Paisa Mil Jaaye...Tabhi Rotia'n Sekti Hai,

Kaisi Dunia Ho Gayi Kaisa Zamaana Ho Gaya
Paise Bagair..Pyar Bhi Jaane Kaha'n Kho Gaya..

Aise Jeene Se To Behtar Hai Dunia Chhod Dein,
Sabhi Rishte-Naato Se Apna Muh Mod Lein...

Jise Bhi Samjha Apna, Wo Apna Dikhta Nahi...
In Ke Beech Dum Ghut.ta Hai Dil Lagta Nahi,

Teri Dunia Mein Mohabat Ka Nishan Milta Nahi
Har Koyi Jaha'n Matlavi Hai...Insaan Dikhta Nahi,
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2010, 07:21:45 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AVTAAR RAYAT JI SACH KAHA HAI.BAHUT KHOOBSURATI SE SACH KO PESH KIYA HAI, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

MOHABBAT KYA SHAI HAI  BHOOKHE KO NAHI PATAA,
MAR JAYEGA TEZ DHOOP SE BINA CHHAT AAFTAAB KO NAHI PATA.
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2010, 07:51:08 AM »
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Wah wah Avtar ji,bahut sachai ,gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

hmm par sab biwi aisi nahi hoti.bina paisa ke bhi roti belti hai. Giggle Giggle tongue3
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2010, 08:42:38 AM »
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Nice poem Avtar-ji..... Applause Applause Applause
Ye tou is kalyug ki sachayee hai...

Jab se tolna shuru kiya Rishto ko paise-se
Rishte ab rishte nahi lagte-2 Vyapaar jaise


Aye Khuda,,,

Teri Dunia Mein Mohabat Ka Nishaan Milta Nahi
Har Koyi Jaha'n Matlavi Hai...Insaan Dikhta Nahi,

Koyi Ab Dunia Mein Sachaayi Ko Nahi Poochhta,
Koyi Aisa Nahi, Jo Immaan Ke Liye Bikta Nahi,

Jaha'n Sabhi Rishte Ab Paiso Se Dilo Ko Tolte Hein,
Ab To Baago Ke Phool Bhi...Paiso'n Bagair Khilta Nahi

Har Rishta Jaise Paise Par Aakar Ruk Gaya...
Laachaar Aadmi Paise Ke Aage Jhuk Gaya,

Aaj Ki Biwi Bhi Pehle Bank Balance Dekhti Hai
Usey Paisa Mil Jaaye...Tabhi Rotia'n Sekti Hai,

Kaisi Dunia Ho Gayi Kaisa Zamaana Ho Gaya
Paise Bagair..Pyar Bhi Jaane Kaha'n Kho Gaya..

Aise Jeene Se To Behtar Hai Dunia Chhod Dein,
Sabhi Rishte-Naato Se Apna Muh Mod Lein...

Jise Bhi Samjha Apna, Wo Apna Dikhta Nahi...
In Ke Beech Dum Ghut.ta Hai Dil Lagta Nahi,

Teri Dunia Mein Mohabat Ka Nishan Milta Nahi
Har Koyi Jaha'n Matlavi Hai...Insaan Dikhta Nahi,

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AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2010, 01:41:08 PM »
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Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukria,,,Suresh Ji,,,
Madhu Ji,,,Koyal Ji,,,Thanx Alot,,,
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2010, 08:31:13 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Avtar ji... sach me aaj ki duniya me paisa hi sab kuch ho gaya hai.. sirf paisa... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye kavita...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2010, 09:43:15 PM »
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Very true .......... Sach ka Samna.........

Bt avtaar ji ..... 5 ungliyan brabar nhi hoti ji .....

bt yh Dis is Kalyug!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2010, 01:22:33 PM »
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Avtar-ji aapka bahut shukriya.....

Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukria,,,Suresh Ji,,,
Madhu Ji,,,Koyal Ji,,,Thanx Alot,,,

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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2013, 12:53:27 AM »
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Sahi bhai aaj paisa kama k doge to hi gar wale b puchenge warna koi nai puchta h..wo kahete hna.."paisa khuda nahi hota h, par khuda se kam b nai hota h..."
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