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by Tuhina on February 12, 2013, 07:50:56 AM
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YE  MATRA  SYAHI  AUR  AKSHAR  NAHIN ,  MERI  JIVIT  BHAVNAYEN  HAIN. ......                                            IS  PATRA  ME  PALLAVIT  HOTI , MERI   SUNAHARI  KALPANAYEN HAIN......                                              JAHAN  AKSHAR  SUNDAR  HAIN, AUR  KALAM  VEG  SE  CHALATI  HAI.... AISI  HI  KHOOBSURAT  THI  APNE  RISHTE  KI  SHURUAT ,  SHARMATE  HUE  KAHATI  HAI......                              JAHAN  PE  SHABD  ADHOORE  CHOOTE  HON,  AUR  KALAM  REH  REHKAR  THAK  JAYE ,  MAAN  LENA  YE  MERI  SAANSON  KI  GATI  HAI , TUM  BIN  JO  RUK  RUKAR  AAYE...                              JAHAN  PE  SYAHI  GAARHI  LAGE  AUR  SHABD  BAHUT  HI  BHAARI  LAGEN..... VO  MERA  GUSSA  AUR  SHIKAYAT  HAI ,  KYA  MERI  NAHIN  AB  JARURAT  HAI  ?                                    JAHAN  PE  SYAHI  HAI HALKI  AUR  SHABD  DHUNDHLE  HO  GAYE  MERE   AANSUON  KA  PRAMAN  HAIN  VE , JO  TUMHARA  SPARSH  PAANE  KO  MERA  SAATH  CHOOR  GAYE ........    
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2013, 08:15:37 AM »
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kya baat hai bohut khoob bohut umda
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2013, 08:26:05 AM »
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Tuhina--
aap bht khoob ehsaas bayan krti hain
bas thora font aur space ka dhyan rakhe likhte waqt
behtar hoga agr 2-3 lines me divide karke likhe--

iss kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai
likhte rahe
aate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2013, 08:31:36 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2013, 08:51:09 AM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2013, 10:01:22 AM »
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nice ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2013, 10:54:37 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2013, 05:28:38 AM »
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very nice
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