RET PAR NAAM LIKHNE KI KOSHISH...

by soudagar on July 17, 2013, 07:05:54 PM
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ret par naam likhne se kya fayda
ek aayi lehar kuch bachega nahi
tumne pathar sa dil humko keh to dia
patharon pe likhoge  meetega nahi

main to patjhad tha phir kyun nimantran dia
reetu basanti ko tan par lapete huye
aas mann mein liye pyas tann mein liye
kab sharad aai  pallu samete huye

tumne pheri nigahein adhera hua
aisA lagta hai suraj ugega nahi

main to holi mana lunga sach maaniye
tum diwali banogi yeh aabhas do
main tumhe sonp dunga tumhari dhara
tum mere pankho KO mera aakas do

ungliyon par dupatta lapeto.n na tum
yun karoge to dil chup rahega nahi

aankh kholi to tum rukmani si dikhi
band ki aankh to radhika tum lagi
jab bhi socha tumhe shant ekant mein
meera bai si ek sadhika tum lagi

krishan ki bansuri par bharosa rakho
mann kahin bhi rahe par digega nahi

tumne pathar sa dil humko keh to dia
patharon pe likhoge  meetega nahi

VISHNU SAXSENA


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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2013, 08:17:55 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 17, 2013, 07:05:54 PM
ret par naam likhne se kya fayda
ek aayi lehar kuch bachega nahi
tumne pathar sa dil humko keh to dia
patharon pe likhoge  meetega nahi

main to patjhad tha phir kyun nimantran dia
reetu basanti ko tan par lapete huye
aas mann mein liye pyas tann mein liye
kab sharad aai  pallu samete huye

tumne pheri nigahein adhera hua
aisA lagta hai suraj ugega nahi

main to holi mana lunga sach maaniye
tum diwali banogi yeh aabhas do
main tumhe sonp dunga tumhari dhara
tum mere pankho KO mera aakas do

ungliyon par dupatta lapeto.n na tum
yun karoge to dil chup rahega nahi

aankh kholi to tum rukmani si dikhi
band ki aankh to radhika tum lagi
jab bhi socha tumhe shant ekant mein
meera bai si ek sadhika tum lagi

krishan ki bansuri par bharosa rakho
mann kahin bhi rahe par digega nahi

tumne pathar sa dil humko keh to dia
patharon pe likhoge  meetega nahi

VISHNU SAXSENA


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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2013, 08:20:40 PM »
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aankh kholi to tum rukmani si dikhi
band ki aankh to radhika tum lagi
jab bhi socha tumhe shant ekant mein
meera bai si ek sadhika tum lagi

krishan ki bansuri par bharosa rakho
mann kahin bhi rahe par digega nahi

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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2013, 09:28:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause guuuuuuuuuuuud saudagar ji
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waah waah bahut khoob Saudagar jee, nice sharing.
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2013, 02:11:21 AM »
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tumne pathar sa dil humko keh to dia
patharon pe likhoge  meetega nahi

VISHNU SAXSENA  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2013, 01:49:29 PM »
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beautiful sharing......
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just awesoooome sharing soudagar ji
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shukriya laaiba ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2013, 07:43:07 PM »
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bahut khoob
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