umr se lamba safar.....

by ripan dev on June 02, 2012, 02:48:50 AM
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ya rabb mere kash dua mein aaj asar ho jaye
janmo se uska hoon usko kash khabar ho jaye

sab ki aakhein nam hai yun to chak jigar par mere
mere haal pe uska bhi to daaman tar ho jaye

uski baat kahun kya wo jis aur ghadi bhar baithe
ujda sa aangan bhi phir to phulo ka ghar ho jaye

koi maseeha rehta ho uski baton mein jaise
wo jis aur ho sari duniya yaar udhr ho jaye

barso tak mehke wo rasta , manjil aur fijaye
jis taraf bhi uski bas ek bar gujar ho jaye

suraj ka bas kab chalta hai ab apni dharti par
jis pal khole aakhein wo, us pal roj seher ho jaye

uske naam se chalte hai sab jugnu, chand, ghatayein
main jis aur bhi jaun usko roj khabar ho jaye

barso mein wo aaj phir sath chale hai mere
umr se lamba apna bhi yeh aaj safar ho jaye..

Ayaan
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2012, 04:28:24 AM »
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bahut khoob daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2012, 08:26:38 AM »
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Dev Jee Aadaab!


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ya rabb mere kash dua mein aaj asar ho jaye
janmo se uska hoon usko kash khabar ho jaye

sab ki aakhein nam hai yun to chak jigar par mere
mere haal pe uska bhi to daaman tar ho jaye

uski baat kahun kya wo jis aur ghadi bhar baithe
ujda sa aangan bhi phir to phulo ka ghar ho jaye

koi maseeha rehta ho uski baton mein jaise
wo jis aur ho sari duniya yaar udhr ho jaye

barso tak mehke wo rasta , manjil aur fijaye
jis taraf bhi uski bas ek bar gujar ho jaye

suraj ka bas kab chalta hai ab apni dharti par
jis pal khole aakhein wo, us pal roj seher ho jaye

uske naam se chalte hai sab jugnu, chand, ghatayein
main jis aur bhi jaun usko roj khabar ho jaye

barso mein wo aaj phir sath chale hai mere
umr se lamba apna bhi yeh aaj safar ho jaye..

Ayaan

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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2012, 08:31:44 AM »
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Bahut khoob , ripan dev ji.
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2012, 03:56:30 PM »
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lajawab peshkash
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2012, 01:59:32 AM »
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thanx to all
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