waqt ,dunia , rishte badal rahe hain....

by soudagar on August 08, 2012, 04:39:28 PM
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jab main chhota tha,
shayad dunia bahut  badi hua karti thi..
mujhe yaad hai mere ghar se "school" tak ka wo rasta,
kya kya nahin tha wahan,
chat ke thele, zalebi ki dukaan,burf ke gole,sab kuch
ab wahan " mobile shop", "video parlour" hain, phir b hi sab suna hai...
shayad ab dunia simat rahi hai......


jab main chhota tha,
shayad shamein bahut lambi hua karti thi....
main hath mein patang ki dor pakde,ghanto udaa karta thaa
wo lambi " cycle ki race", wo bachpan ke khel,
wo har shaam thak ke chur ho janaa,
ab shaam nahi hoti, din dhalta hai aur seedhe raat ho jati hai.........
shayad waqt seemat rahaa hai.......

jab main chhota tha,
shayad dosti  bahut gehri hua karrti thii,
din bhar wo hunjuum banakar khelna,
wo dosto ke ghar ka khaana, sath hasna sath rona,
ab bhi mere kai dost hai,par dosti jaane kahan hai,
jab bhi " traffic signal"pe milte hai," Hi" karte hai
aur apne apne raste chal dete hain,
shayad ab rishte badal rahe hain..shayad ab sab kuch badal raha hai.
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2012, 04:48:07 PM »
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jab main chhota tha,
shayad dunia bahut  badi hua karti thi..
mujhe yaad hai mere ghar se "school" tak ka wo rasta,
kya kya nahin tha wahan,
chhat ke thele, zalebi ki dukaan,burf ke gole,sab kuch
ab wahan " mobile shop", "video parlour" hain, phir b hi sab suna hai...
shayad ab dunia simat rahi hai......


jab main chhota tha,
shayad shamein bahut lambi hua karti thi....
main hath mein patang ki dor pakde,ghanto udaa karta thaa
wo lambi " cycle ki race", wo bachpan ke khel,
wo har shaam thak ke chur ho janaa,
ab shaam nahi hoti, din dhalta hai aur seedhe raat ho jati hai.........
shayad waqt seemat rahaa hai.......

jab main chhota tha,
shayad dosti  bahut gehri hua karrti thii,
din bhar wo hunjuum banakar khelna,
wo dosto ke ghar ka khaana, sath hasna sath rona,
ab bhi mere kai dost hai,par dosti jaane kahan hai,
jab bhi " traffic signal"pe milte hai," Hi" karte hai
aur apne apne raste chal dete hain,
shayad ab rishte badal rahe hain..shayad ab sab kuch badal raha hai.


Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!!!

Yeh Zindagi Ki Talk Haqeeqat hai..Zindagi MeN Kuch Bhi Ek Saa nahi Rehta..
Jab Rishte Hi Ek Se nahi Reh Jaate To Baaki Sab Bahut Door Ki Baatein Hai..


Aapka Yeh Kalaam padhkar Kuch iss Vishey Par likhne Ka Mann Ho Aaya Hai..Khair bahut Bahut Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan

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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2012, 05:04:42 PM »
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saudagar ji  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
har cheez ko badalte dekha hai
har rishte ko badalte dekha hai
yahn tak ki apne khoon ko paani hote dekha hai
is rang badlti duniyan men
har shai ko badlte dekah hai
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2012, 06:22:32 PM »
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SACHI BAAT
jab main chhota tha,
shayad dunia bahut  badi hua karti thi..
mujhe yaad hai mere ghar se "school" tak ka wo rasta,
kya kya nahin tha wahan,
chat ke thele, zalebi ki dukaan,burf ke gole,sab kuch
ab wahan " mobile shop", "video parlour" hain, phir b hi sab suna hai...
shayad ab dunia simat rahi hai......


jab main chhota tha,
shayad shamein bahut lambi hua karti thi....
main hath mein patang ki dor pakde,ghanto udaa karta thaa
wo lambi " cycle ki race", wo bachpan ke khel,
wo har shaam thak ke chur ho janaa,
ab shaam nahi hoti, din dhalta hai aur seedhe raat ho jati hai.........
shayad waqt seemat rahaa hai.......

jab main chhota tha,
shayad dosti  bahut gehri hua karrti thii,
din bhar wo hunjuum banakar khelna,
wo dosto ke ghar ka khaana, sath hasna sath rona,
ab bhi mere kai dost hai,par dosti jaane kahan hai,
jab bhi " traffic signal"pe milte hai," Hi" karte hai
aur apne apne raste chal dete hain,
shayad ab rishte badal rahe hain..shayad ab sab kuch badal raha hai.

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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2012, 01:19:15 AM »
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Bahut  khoob saudagarji, dhero dad
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2012, 05:34:42 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut khoobsurat andaaz me aapne sach ko bayaan kiya hai.. sahi me hum aajkal itne busy hain zindagi ki daud me ki apni khushi ke liye thoda sa waqt nikaalna bhi bahut mushkil ho gaya hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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bahut bahut shukriya khawahish ji
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bahut bhut shukriya bansi ji
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