woh bhi jamana thha, yeh bhi jamana hai

by nandbahu on June 26, 2012, 12:08:17 AM
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Sab mil bant kar khatey thhey
woh bhi jamana thha
apnee roti key liey lartey hain
ye bhi jamana hai
maa babuji bulatey thhey
woh bhi jamana thha
mom dad bulatey hain
yeh bhi jamana hai
sanjhey chulhey jaltey thhey
woh bhi jamana thha
apney chulhey ki chinta hai
yeh bhi jamana hai
mil key rai battey thhey
woh bhi jamana thha
kissi ki nahi suntey hain
ye bhi jamana hai
thhorey pey santosh thha
woh bhi jamana thha
ghar bharey phir bhi asantosh
ye bhi jamana hai
desh key liey mit tey thhey
woh bhi jamana thha
aaj desh ko loot rahey hain
ye bhi jamana hai


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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2012, 02:13:02 AM »
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2012, 02:21:50 AM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2012, 05:41:07 AM »
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very correct !
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2012, 07:17:48 AM »
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Nand ji, very nice sharing.

Ek baat: Jamana nahi, isko Zamana hona chahiye.  Aur agar ye aapki apni kavita hai toh isko aap isse Poetry Lounge main naa dale, balki yahan dale ..
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/tanziya-aur-tehreekbaksh-shayariyan-b133.0/
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2012, 03:41:54 PM »
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yeh meri apnee kavita hai, thanx for comments
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2012, 04:35:10 PM »
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waah waah waah nand g
bohoot khoob kaha aapne
dheroon daad !!
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2012, 04:37:35 PM »
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nandbahu bahut umda kavita likhi hai aapne dhero daad aur mubarakbaad......

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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2012, 04:49:11 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB COMPARE KIYA HAI
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«Reply #9 on: June 27, 2012, 12:21:22 AM »
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dhanyvad mitro mera utsahvardhan key liey 
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