Zehar de Gaya mujhko Badle dawa ke. By "Aarish"

by Aarish on June 15, 2012, 05:06:07 AM
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Na to Manzilen Hain Na Hi Karwaa(n)Hai,
Magar Ye Safar mera phir bhi rawa(n) hai,

Hawa Hai ghata hai Ya tu phir dhuan hai,
Batade qamar hai ya phir Kehkasha(n) hain,

Yahan par shikari hi khud baghba(n) hai,
Mere Yaar aisa hi hindusta(n) Hai,

Wahi Aag Se Jal Gaya mere Yaroo(n)
samandar kinare mera jo maka(n) hai,

Zehar de gaya mujhko badle dawa ke,
Tabib E Shehar bhi bada be imaa(n) hai

Adab dhundhta hun main daur E Gazab main,
Yahan hai wahan hai na jane kaha(n) hai,

Basi hai jigar main ye mehboob bankar,
badi khoobsurat ye URDU Zaba(n) hai,

Milegi Kahan roshni tumko "Aarish"
Yahan har taraf aik andha kua(n) hai,







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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2012, 05:06:18 AM »
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Na to Manzilen Hain Na Hi Karwaa(n)Hai,

Magar Ye Safar mera phir bhi rawa(n) hai,                 

Hawa Hai ghata hai Ya tu phir dhuan hai,

Batade qamar hai ya phir Kehkasha(n) hain,

Yahan par shikari hi khud baghba(n) hai,

Mere Yaar aisa hi hindusta(n) Hai,

Wahi Aag Se Jal Gaya mere Yaroo(n)

samandar kinare mera jo maka(n) hai,

Zehar de gaya mujhko badle dawa ke,

Tabib E Shehar bhi bada be imaa(n) hai

Adab dhundhta hun main daur E Gazab main,

Yahan hai wahan hai na jane kaha(n) hai,

Basi hai jigar main ye mehboob bankar,

badi khoobsurat ye URDU Zaba(n) hai,

Milegi Kahan roshni tumko "Aarish"

Yahan har taraf aik andha kua(n) hai






                                 "Aarish"







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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 05:25:44 AM »
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boht khub kaha apne
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 05:33:15 AM »
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bahut pyaaraa kalaam arish khush raho dheon daad aur mubaarak baad aur ek rau bhee
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 05:46:06 AM »
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achhi phkash hai ,arish saheb . tahe dil se muarakbad pesh hai.
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 05:47:14 AM »
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 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut Shukriya sir aapki hi himmat afzai aur duao ka natija hai , main tehedil se mamnoon aur mashkoor hun aapka ,,,,,
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2012, 05:49:23 AM »
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Shukriya hasan sahab bohut nawazish
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2012, 07:32:48 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut bahut hi khoob..... Simplly superb..........great work aarish ji.....dhero daad aur mubark bad.......aur ek rau bhi
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2012, 08:01:48 AM »
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Applause Applause khoob likha jnab
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2012, 08:05:13 AM »
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 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut shukriya karam inayat nawazish,
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2012, 10:19:48 AM »
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Na to Manzilen Hain Na Hi Karwaa(n)Hai,

Magar Ye Safar mera phir bhi rawa(n) hai,                 

Hawa Hai ghata hai Ya tu phir dhuan hai,

Batade qamar hai ya phir Kehkasha(n) hain,

Yahan par shikari hi khud baghba(n) hai,

Mere Yaar aisa hi hindusta(n) Hai,

Wahi Aag Se Jal Gaya mere Yaroo(n)

samandar kinare mera jo maka(n) hai,

Zehar de gaya mujhko badle dawa ke,

Tabib E Shehar bhi bada be imaa(n) hai

Adab dhundhta hun main daur E Gazab main,

Yahan hai wahan hai na jane kaha(n) hai,

Basi hai jigar main ye mehboob bankar,

badi khoobsurat ye URDU Zaba(n) hai,

Milegi Kahan roshni tumko "Aarish"

Yahan har taraf aik andha kua(n) hai






                                 "Aarish"








WAAAAAAAAAAAH!
BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2012, 11:05:18 AM »
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Aarish Sahaab Aadaab!

bahut khoob janab badi hi khoob aur umdaa gazal kahi hai...
Kafi achche khayaalat ko khoob lafzoN meiN baNdha hai janab.. Usual Smile

Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
HaaN in roman meiN lafzoN ko baratne ke liye bracket ki zaroorat
nahi hai... jab kisi lafz ki awaaz silent meiN bayaaN karni hai
toH use capital meiN likhiye....

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2012, 12:43:24 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2012, 01:08:42 PM »
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Bhut hee achchi gajal hai.
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2012, 06:25:59 PM »
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Na to Manzilen Hain Na Hi Karwaa(n)Hai,
Magar Ye Safar mera phir bhi rawa(n) hai,

Hawa Hai ghata hai Ya tu phir dhuan hai,
Batade qamar hai ya phir Kehkasha(n) hain,

Yahan par shikari hi khud baghba(n) hai,
Mere Yaar aisa hi hindusta(n) Hai,

Wahi Aag Se Jal Gaya mere Yaroo(n)
samandar kinare mera jo maka(n) hai,

Zehar de gaya mujhko badle dawa ke,
Tabib E Shehar bhi bada be imaa(n) hai

Adab dhundhta hun main daur E Gazab main,
Yahan hai wahan hai na jane kaha(n) hai,

Basi hai jigar main ye mehboob bankar,
badi khoobsurat ye URDU Zaba(n) hai,

Milegi Kahan roshni tumko "Aarish"
Yahan har taraf aik andha kua(n) hai,









BAHUT BAHUT BAHUT KHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB ARISH.
VERIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAICE---ONE RAU
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