कहा जब शे'र मैने अनकहा-सा

by suman59 on June 21, 2012, 05:27:50 PM
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कहा जब शे'र मैने अनकहा-सा
लगा कुछ मिल गया मुझको खुदा-सा

उभर आता है इसमें अक्स कैसे
है पानी में छुपा क्या आईना-सा

उसे देखा है जितनी बार मैने
लगा हर बार वो मुझको नया-सा

मुक्कदर से हूँ कुछ नाराज मैं भी
मुक्कदर भी है कुछ मुझसे खफा-सा

अजब अंदाज है तेरा भी यारब !
है सबके सामने सबसे छुपा-सा

ये किसने छाँव की है मेरे सर पर
ये किसका हाँथ है दश्ते दुआ-सा

खुदा का शुक्र है बक्शा है उसने
मेरी गजलों को इक लहजा नया-सा
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2012, 05:32:45 PM »
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ahhha bahut hi badhiya suman ji..... bahut umda likha hai aapne ..... dhero daad....bahut bahut badhai is besqeemti rachna ke lie........
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2012, 05:40:37 PM »
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KHUB
JINDGI MEI JISE KHITAAB DIYA HAMNE KHUDA SA
MILA DIYA MOHABAT KA USSE HAME MANOJ BHUJHA SA
कहा जब शे'र मैने अनकहा-सा
लगा कुछ मिल गया मुझको खुदा-सा

उभर आता है इसमें अक्स कैसे
है पानी में छुपा क्या आईना-सा

उसे देखा है जितनी बार मैने
लगा हर बार वो मुझको नया-सा

मुक्कदर से हूँ कुछ नाराज मैं भी
मुक्कदर भी है कुछ मुझसे खफा-सा

अजब अंदाज है तेरा भी यारब !
है सबके सामने सबसे छुपा-सा

ये किसने छाँव की है मेरे सर पर
ये किसका हाँथ है दश्ते दुआ-सा

खुदा का शुक्र है बक्शा है उसने
मेरी गजलों को इक लहजा नया-सा

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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2012, 06:42:48 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurat gazal suman ji badhai ke saath aapko pahla rau
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2012, 02:45:05 AM »
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bahut khoob, ek rau to banta hai aapka.
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2012, 03:38:07 AM »
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bahut khoob suman ji dil se daad qubool kare
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2012, 03:40:31 PM »
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shukriya manoj jee, ahuja jee, dr jee and hriday jee
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