प्यार की भी अपनी जबान होती है -रस्तोगी

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on July 25, 2015, 05:17:13 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 779 times)
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
Reply with quote
प्यार की भी अपनी तरह की एक जबान होती  
सीखने के लिए इसकी कोई उमर भी नही होती

ये किसी हिन्दू या मुसलमान की नही होती
ये तो बस दो दिलो की अपनी जबान होती

सिखाने के लिए इसको कोई न टीचर होती
बस सीखने के लिए केवल एक चाहत होती

इसके लिए कलम दवात की जरूरत नही होती
बस आँखों के लिए आँखों की जरूरत ही होती  

आर के रस्तोगी  
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2015, 11:37:39 AM »
Reply with quote
bohat khubb waaaaahhhhhhh
Logged
Prabha prakas
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 24
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
3 days, 3 hours and 49 minutes.
Posts: 961
Member Since: Feb 2015


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2015, 12:02:36 PM »
Reply with quote
bohat khubb waaaaahhhhhhh Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
anmolarora
Guest
«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2015, 12:23:50 PM »
Reply with quote
umdddda shayari
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2015, 12:40:25 PM »
Reply with quote
श्री जीत जैनम जी शुक्रिया
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2015, 12:42:03 PM »
Reply with quote
प्रभा प्रकाश जी शुक्रिया
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2015, 12:43:12 PM »
Reply with quote
श्री अनमोल अरोरा जी शुक्रिया
Logged
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2015, 06:07:41 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob Rastogi Jee.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

प्यार की भी अपनी तरह की एक जबान होती  
सीखने के लिए इसकी कोई उमर भी नही होती

ये किसी हिन्दू या मुसलमान की नही होती
ये तो बस दो दिलो की अपनी जबान होती

सिखाने के लिए इसको कोई न टीचर होती
बस सीखने के लिए केवल एक चाहत होती

इसके लिए कलम दवात की जरूरत नही होती
बस आँखों के लिए आँखों की जरूरत ही होती

Pyaar kee bhi ek zuban hai hotee
Seekhney ko koi umr nahin hai hotee

Kisee teacher kee bhi koi zarurat nahin
Bas chahat kee hee sirf zarurat hai hotee

Koi kalam dwaat bhi zarooree nahin
Kisee aankhon mein dekney kee zarurat hai hotee

Ram krishan Jee main aapko ek mashwaraa de rahaa hoon. Shayad aapko achhaa lgey yaa nahin lagey. Mere paas Hindi kaa software nahin hai, iss liye english mein likh rahaa hoon.
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2015, 07:46:22 AM »
Reply with quote
shri surindran ji masware ke liye shukrya .chuki mere Lap top me Hindi aur English dono verson hae  isliye dono bhashao me likhne ki koshis karta taaki sabhi log padh ske,Fir ek bar aapka shukrya.
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2015, 09:40:21 AM »
Reply with quote
प्यार की भी अपनी तरह की एक जबान होती 
सीखने के लिए इसकी कोई उमर भी नही होती

ये किसी हिन्दू या मुसलमान की नही होती
ये तो बस दो दिलो की अपनी जबान होती

सिखाने के लिए इसको कोई न टीचर होती
बस सीखने के लिए केवल एक चाहत होती

इसके लिए कलम दवात की जरूरत नही होती
बस आँखों के लिए आँखों की जरूरत ही होती 

आर के रस्तोगी   




 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2015, 09:44:43 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob Rastogi Jee.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

प्यार की भी अपनी तरह की एक जबान होती  
सीखने के लिए इसकी कोई उमर भी नही होती

ये किसी हिन्दू या मुसलमान की नही होती
ये तो बस दो दिलो की अपनी जबान होती

सिखाने के लिए इसको कोई न टीचर होती
बस सीखने के लिए केवल एक चाहत होती

इसके लिए कलम दवात की जरूरत नही होती
बस आँखों के लिए आँखों की जरूरत ही होती

Pyaar kee bhi ek zuban hai hotee not seems correct arrangements Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Seekhney ko koi umr nahin hai hotee

Kisee teacher kee bhi koi zarurat nahin
Bas chahat kee hee sirf zarurat hai hotee

Koi kalam dwaat bhi zarooree nahin
Kisee aankhon mein dekney kee zarurat hai hotee

Ram krishan Jee main aapko ek mashwaraa de rahaa hoon. Shayad aapko achhaa lgey yaa nahin lagey. Mere paas Hindi kaa software nahin hai, iss liye english mein likh rahaa hoon.


boss!!!!!!!!


surinder jee as you have recomposed the poem of shree rastogee but still it is not up
to the mark read once again and try to find rhythm in your composition


 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2015, 04:53:12 PM »
Reply with quote
Shri Qalb Sahib,maine aapke aur Shri Surendran ji ke vichaar v Recomposition Padha.Kripya Aap bhi ise composition krne ki takleef kre, Mea aapka bda hi Shukrgujar rhuga. R.K.rastogi 
Logged
jp
New Member


Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
18 minutes.
Posts: 16
Member Since: Jul 2015


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2015, 05:31:30 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2015, 06:02:03 AM »
Reply with quote
Shri J.P. Ji Shukriya
Logged
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 69
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
30 days, 21 hours and 9 minutes.

Posts: 4988
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2015, 07:33:29 AM »
Reply with quote
सभी शायरों व पाठको का शुक्रिया
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 07:41:31 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.156 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer