Anna Ji Ka Vaar

by songwriter_123 on August 19, 2011, 04:04:20 AM
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Goonj uthi Hoonkar
Jhunk Gayi Sarkar

Anna ji ke vaar
Se haar gaya Bhrastachaar

Tum bhi jao yaar
Haath mein le kar mashaal

Hum bhi jayege
Khud ko karke laal

Ahinsa ki foonkar
Hinsa ki haar

Anna ji ke vaar
Se haar gaya bhrastachaar

Kaant ke rakh dege hum

Jo unhone roka humhe

Vaar boliyon se karege hum

Jo unhone toka humhe

Goonj Uthi Hoonkar

Jhunk Gayi Sarkar

Anna Ji ke Vaar

Se haar gaya Bhrastachaar
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2011, 05:26:58 PM »
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I think U must change these words as far as Ahinsa is concerned.."Kaant ke rakh dege hum" ..rest is quite good..Bahut Khoob...keep it up!!!
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