Apna Bana Gaye

by richa_jain on August 11, 2013, 09:35:33 PM
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Yu Nazar Ki Baat Ki Aur Dil Chura
Gaye
Andhero Ke Saaye Mein Dhadkan
Suna Gaye
Hum To Samajhe Te Ajnabi Aapko
Par Aap To Hume Apna Bana Gaye
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2013, 09:40:01 PM »
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Hi Richa, very nice sharing.

I think I can improve it a bit:

Yu NazaroN se Baat Ki, Aur Dil Chura Gaye
Andhero Ke Saaye Mein Dhadkan Suna Gaye
Hum To Samajhe Te Ajnabi Aapko
Par Aap To Hume Apna Bana Gaye
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2013, 01:04:25 AM »
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nice thought.
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2013, 01:17:56 AM »
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bahut khub
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2013, 01:36:45 AM »
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wah kya khub kaha welcome dear
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2013, 02:00:10 AM »
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nice
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