"Kamine Chokre" -SKY-

by SkykiTears on September 03, 2011, 07:50:27 AM
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Gali Mein Khada Tha Fatichar Sa Ladka
Halat Se Tha Shayad Bilkul Hi Kadka
Chehra Bhi Uska Murjhaya Hua Tha
Par Is Baat Ka Andaaza Use Na Hua Tha
Bahut Der Se Wo Tak-Taki Laga Kar Upar Ki Taraf Dekh Raha Tha
Jaha Ek Rahees Bade Chaav Se Cake Kha Raha Tha
Tabhi Bhauka Kutta, Ladke Ne Bhi Mud Ke Dekha
Isi Beech Us Rahees Ne Cake Ka Tukda Feka
Lapka Wo Kutta, Or Lapka Wo Ladka
Na Fati Uski Chhaati, Na Kaleja Bhi Dhadka
Bahut Hui Us Tukde Ke Liye Dono Me Cheena-Jhapti
Ant Me Ladke Ne Jeet Hi Li Bhook Ki Ye Kushti
Wo Rahees Un Dono Ko Dekh Raha Tha
Muft Ke Tamaashe Ka Khoob Maza Loot Raha Tha
Shareer Tha Lahu-Luhaan, Par Chehre Par Khushi Thi
Kyuki Aaj 2 Din Baad Roti Jo Naseeb Hui Thi
Jeet Ki Khushi Mein Us Ladke Ka Chehra Upar Ki Or Uth Gaya
‘Uf Ye Kamine Chokre’, Kah Kar Wapas Wo Rahees Kursi Par Baith Gaya…


- Ashwani Mishra

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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2011, 08:08:13 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2011, 09:30:13 AM »
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Gali Mein Khada Tha Fatichar Sa Ladka
Halat Se Tha Shayad Bilkul Hi Kadka
Chehra Bhi Uska Murjhaya Hua Tha
Par Is Baat Ka Andaaza Use Na Hua Tha
Bahut Der Se Wo Tak-Taki Laga Kar Upar Ki Taraf Dekh Raha Tha
Jaha Ek Rahees Bade Chaav Se Cake Kha Raha Tha
Tabhi Bhauka Kutta, Ladke Ne Bhi Mud Ke Dekha
Isi Beech Us Rahees Ne Cake Ka Tukda Feka
Lapka Wo Kutta, Or Lapka Wo Ladka
Na Fati Uski Chhaati, Na Kaleja Bhi Dhadka
Bahut Hui Us Tukde Ke Liye Dono Me Cheena-Jhapti
Ant Me Ladke Ne Jeet Hi Li Bhook Ki Ye Kushti
Wo Rahees Un Dono Ko Dekh Raha Tha
Muft Ke Tamaashe Ka Khoob Maza Loot Raha Tha
Shareer Tha Lahu-Luhaan, Par Chehre Par Khushi Thi
Kyuki Aaj 2 Din Baad Roti Jo Naseeb Hui Thi
Jeet Ki Khushi Mein Us Ladke Ka Chehra Upar Ki Or Uth Gaya
‘Uf Ye Kamine Chokre’, Kah Kar Wapas Wo Rahees Kursi Par Baith Gaya…

- Ashwani Mishra

-SKY-

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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2011, 09:46:45 AM »
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Bahut Khooob!!!Zindagi Ki Kadwi Sachai par Likhi Gayi hai Yeh kavita..

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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2011, 09:49:29 AM »
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Sahi Kaha Aap Ne Sheba Sahiba

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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2011, 09:51:08 AM »
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Shukriya khwaish Ji.. Sahi Kaha Aap ne Zindagi Ki Kadwi Sachai par Likhi Gayi hai Yeh kavita..
Aur Bht dard Bhari b Hai sad5 sad5

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