Toot Gaya Hu Main ... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on September 03, 2009, 04:46:08 PM
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BAHUT UDAAS HAI KOI TERE JANEY SEY
HO SAKEY TOH LAUT AAO KISI BAHANEY SEY
TU LAAKH KHAFA SAHI PAR EK BAAR TOH DEKH
KOI TOOT GAYA TERE ROOTH JANEY SEY...



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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2009, 10:45:47 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji wonderful creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 07:01:53 AM »
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WAH WAH
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2009, 10:24:39 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on September 03, 2009, 04:46:08 PM


BAHUT UDAAS HAI KOI TERE JANEY SEY
HO SAKEY TOH LAUT AAO KISI BAHANEY SEY
TU LAAKH KHAFA SAHI PAR EK BAAR TOH DEKH
KOI TOOT GAYA TERE ROOTH JANEY SEY...



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com


KYA BAAT HAI  JASBIRSINGH JI.......

BAHUT UDAAS HAI KOI TERE JAANE SEY,
DAR HAI CHALA NA JAAYE IS ZAMAANE SEY.
TU LAAKH KHAFA SAHI PAR EK BAAR TOH DEKH,
USKI ZINDAGI BACH SAKHTI HAI TERE LOUT AANE SEY.
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2009, 10:33:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob beautiful lines Cara ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2009, 10:50:10 AM »
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very nice jasbir ji and  cara ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2009, 05:47:00 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 03, 2009, 10:45:47 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji wonderful creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


thanks madhu ji

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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2009, 05:47:19 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on September 04, 2009, 07:01:53 AM
WAH WAH

thanks rastogi ji

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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2009, 05:48:07 PM »
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Quote from: cara on September 04, 2009, 10:24:39 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  JASBIRSINGH JI.......

BAHUT UDAAS HAI KOI TERE JAANE SEY,
DAR HAI CHALA NA JAAYE IS ZAMAANE SEY.
TU LAAKH KHAFA SAHI PAR EK BAAR TOH DEKH,
USKI ZINDAGI BACH SAKHTI HAI TERE LOUT AANE SEY.




thanks cara ji and wah wah wah , bahut hi khoob kaha

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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2009, 05:48:57 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on September 04, 2009, 10:50:10 AM
very nice jasbir ji and  cara ji


thanks nikhaar ji

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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2009, 06:03:04 PM »
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Jasji khoob dard mai likha aapne tearyeyed tearyeyed
Bahoot roya hai wo bhi tujh se duur ja k...... Applause Applause Applause

Pyarr ka bandhan jo hota atoot
Tou kyu rooth kar jaata humdum
Hoti kashish pyarr mai tere jo
Pal bhar mai khich chala aata wo


Quote from: jasbirsingh on September 03, 2009, 04:46:08 PM




BAHUT UDAAS HAI KOI TERE JANEY SEY
HO SAKEY TOH LAUT AAO KISI BAHANEY SEY
TU LAAKH KHAFA SAHI PAR EK BAAR TOH DEKH
KOI TOOT GAYA TERE ROOTH JANEY SEY...



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2009, 06:15:28 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on September 05, 2009, 06:03:04 PM
Jasji khoob dard mai likha aapne tearyeyed tearyeyed
Bahoot roya hai wo bhi tujh se duur ja k...... Applause Applause Applause

Pyarr ka bandhan jo hota atoot
Tou kyu rooth kar jaata humdum
Hoti kashish pyarr mai tere jo
Pal bhar mai khich chala aata wo




thanks sam ji.... and bahut bahut hi khoob likha aap ney

jasbir singh
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2009, 10:17:55 AM »
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wah ..kya baat hai!!!very touching & beautiful lines good job.keep it up...

khuda khuda  kuch bi karke....
rok lu usey koi mannat koi dua karke
kass k pakarh lu daaman uska
choot rha hai jo z.raa z.raa kar ke.
 
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2009, 09:45:38 PM »
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wah bahut khoob janab Jasbir ji




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«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2010, 08:39:26 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on September 07, 2009, 09:45:38 PM
wah bahut khoob janab Jasbir ji


Thanks Javed Ji ...

Jasbir Singh

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