ALGAAV

by smardia on November 08, 2009, 09:14:30 AM
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ALGAAV
Kho diya hai maine vishwaas tumhara,
Shayad,aadarsh tou n tha kabhi mai tumhara,
Magar bharosa tha tumhe mere soch par,
Maana karti thee tum,
Mera kehna, hota sahi ya galat.
                                                                                                                                                                     Kaisee ye hawa chali bedhangi
Kahan hui bhool aur kis-se ?
Vicharon mai aaya kyon badlaav
Hone laga hai ab algaav….

Hui hogi koi bhool-chuk mujhse
Par saabit hua galat mai kitni baar
Gyaan aur samay ka shagird tha main
Sahi maano tou
Anubhavheen insaan he tou tha mai

Ab meri har baat
Kasotiyon par parakhti ho tum,
Aur Har kasoti ka apna
Maapdand (“Standard”) hota hai

Bahut bhinn hain ab apne maapdand
Ab hamesha……Main he galat hota hu.n
Tumhaari kasoti par….

Main tou,Ab bhi chal raha hu.n
Unhi sanskaron aur sidhaanto par
Rahe.n aur soch badlee hai,Sirf tumhari
Samajhti ho jise tum haryali,Hai niri kaai
Lagta hai, aur gehraati jaa rahi hai
Avishwaas ki khaa-yee

Sochta hu.n kya kabhi jeet paunga
Fir se vishwaas tumhaara, main ?                                                                                                                                                    Jaanta nahi kabhi main badlunga,ya tum
Ya honge alag-alag ab raste hamaare…..
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2009, 10:15:04 AM »
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Nice Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2009, 06:51:27 PM »
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Very touching poetry hai aapki...smardiaji...
Aap beeti hai ya kori kalpana.....Jo bhi hai jeevan se judi rachna hai.....daad kabul farmaiye ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: smardia on November 08, 2009, 09:14:30 AM
ALGAAV
Kho diya hai maine vishwaas tumhara,
Shayad,aadarsh tou n tha kabhi mai tumhara,
Magar bharosa tha tumhe mere soch par,
Maana karti thee tum,
Mera kehna, hota sahi ya galat.
                                                                                                                                                                     Kaisee ye hawa chali bedhangi
Kahan hui bhool aur kis-se ?
Vicharon mai aaya kyon badlaav
Hone laga hai ab algaav….

Hui hogi koi bhool-chuk mujhse
Par saabit hua galat mai kitni baar
Gyaan aur samay ka shagird tha main
Sahi maano tou
Anubhavheen insaan he tou tha mai

Ab meri har baat
Kasotiyon par parakhti ho tum,
Aur Har kasoti ka apna
Maapdand (“Standard”) hota hai

Bahut bhinn hain ab apne maapdand
Ab hamesha……Main he galat hota hu.n
Tumhaari kasoti par….

Main tou,Ab bhi chal raha hu.n
Unhi sanskaron aur sidhaanto par
Rahe.n aur soch badlee hai,Sirf tumhari
Samajhti ho jise tum haryali,Hai niri kaai
Lagta hai, aur gehraati jaa rahi hai
Avishwaas ki khaa-yee

Sochta hu.n kya kabhi jeet paunga
Fir se vishwaas tumhaara, main ?                                                                                                                                                    Jaanta nahi kabhi main badlunga,ya tum
Ya honge alag-alag ab raste hamaare…..
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2009, 07:02:50 PM »
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surendra ji,
bahoot hi prabhavshali shabdon se bheda hai aapne hriday ko.....aadi se ant tak kavitaa ke har shabd ne antarman ko chua..
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2009, 09:15:56 PM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Smardia ji,very touching and lovely creation.kamaal ke likha aapne.excellent.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2009, 11:11:41 PM »
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Wah wah smardia ji bahut umda kalam yahan aapne share kiya hai..her ek alfaz dil ko chu gaya hai. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2010, 02:00:04 AM »
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wooow kya khoob shayri hai. Thanks hai ji aapko Smardia jee share karne ke liye Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2010, 03:20:09 AM »
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Nice creation Mardia ji.
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2010, 07:37:38 AM »
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Bekararji aapne ye rachna padhi aur sarahi....rachna safal huyee.......Dhanyawad

Quote from: bekarar on November 08, 2009, 07:02:50 PM
surendra ji,
bahoot hi prabhavshali shabdon se bheda hai aapne hriday ko.....aadi se ant tak kavitaa ke har shabd ne antarman ko chua..
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2010, 09:18:22 AM »
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Shukriya Madhuji....meri kavita ne aap k dil ko chhuaa....
Kavita safal hui....

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 08, 2009, 09:15:56 PM
Wah bahut bahut khoob Smardia ji,very touching and lovely creation.kamaal ke likha aapne.excellent.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2010, 08:26:51 AM »
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Thanks rishi.....


Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 08, 2009, 10:15:04 AM
Nice Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2010, 08:38:38 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht pyari kavita hai surendra ji aapki

kuch kuch apni si kahani lagti hai
ye baat na jayda purani lagti hai
kehne ko bahot kuch hai ispar
par baat suni sunai lagti hai
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2010, 04:23:27 PM »
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Thanks Anamikaji..........................
aapko apni kahani se milti-julti lagi......
kabhi sunaiyega apni kahaani......
likhne aur sunane se dard kuchh kam hota hai aapne kabhi experience kiya...?

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 29, 2010, 08:38:38 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht pyari kavita hai surendra ji aapki

kuch kuch apni si kahani lagti hai
ye baat na jayda purani lagti hai
kehne ko bahot kuch hai ispar
par baat suni sunai lagti hai
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