milney ki bus aas hai

by nandbahu on July 05, 2012, 11:36:25 PM
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hum jab baithey train mein sajan
ayey thhey tum vidai dene
aankhey nam hui jati thhi
tumsey bichhurney ko roti thhi

tun bhi kuchh kehney ko aatur
hum bhi kuchh kehney ko vyakul
tum bhi thhey sakuchaey huey
hum bhi thhey sharmaey huey

train ney jaise seeti dee
tumney daur key banh pakri
aankho sey kuchh tumney kaha
shayd khat likhney ko kaha

aankho mein dukh ka sailab
sawan bhado ban barsa thha
train daurti jati thhi
hath hila hum rotey thhey

yad aatey ab voh najarey
pyar bhari apnee voh batey
hum yahan majboor hai
milney ki bus aas hai
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very good , very nice creation,   Applause   Applause   Applause
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BAHUT KHUB  BAHUT BADHIYA NANDBAHU JI................ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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lovely  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2012, 04:18:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause waah achhee bidaai
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2012, 11:52:41 AM »
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Dhanyavad sainiji, saudagarji and sumanji for my encouragement. Thus helps me to write more in simple language.
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