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NADI PYAS KI BADHTI JAYE
KOI SAMANDAR TO DIKHLAYE
SAAWAN SOOKHA BHADON SOOKHA
PATJHAD SE KYOON AAS LAGAYE
DADUR MOR PAPEEHA GAAYE
PHIR KYOON MERA MANN AKULAYE
CHAND HUA AATISH ANGARA
RAIN TAPISH KI BADHTI JAYE
PHOOL SANG JAB ALI MUSKAYE
SHOOL VIRAH KE DANSH CHUBHAYE
DAADUR=MENDHAK
AKULAYE=BECHAIN HONA
RAIN=RAAT
ALI=BHANWRA
SHOOL=KAANTA
VIRAH=JUDAI
DANSH=NASHTAR
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2010, 01:05:27 AM » |
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wah wah kya umda khayal hai aapka mamta saheba..bahot khoob likha aur aap ne meaning likh kar hum jaise hindi se kam waqifiyat rakhne waalon ke liye ehsaan kardiya..bahot khoob
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2010, 06:07:41 PM » |
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NAZAR SAHEB BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA JO AAP NE KALAAM APSAND FARMAYA.PICHLI HINDI GAZAL ME AAP KE MASHVARE KO DHYAN ME RAKH KAR HI HINDI WORDS MEANING LIKHE GAYE HAIN .AP HI HAIN. ISLIYE TAREEF KE ASALI HAQDAAR AAP HI HAIN.
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2010, 09:01:22 PM » |
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NADI PYAS KI BADHTI JAYE
KOI SAMANDAR TO DIKHLAYE
SAAWAN SOOKHA BHADON SOOKHA
PATJHAD SE KYOON AAS LAGAYE
DADUR MOR PAPEEHA GAAYE
PHIR KYOON MERA MANN AKULAYE
CHAND HUA AATISH ANGARA
RAIN TAPISH KI BADHTI JAYE
PHOOL SANG JAB ALI MUSKAYE
SHOOL VIRAH KE DANSH CHUBHAYE
wapis na lautne ki khabar chode gaye ho
Humsafar bankar yeh safar chod gaye ho
janta hu kyu log meri kalam chum rahe hein
tum mere lafzo mein wo asar chod gaye ho
ye baharein tumko mmujhmein dhodh rahi hein
tum ho jo khud ko na jane kidhar chod gaye ho
daman churane wale mujhko yeh to bata
kyu mere peeche apni nazar chod gaye ho
manjil ki hai khabar na rasto ka hai pata
kyu jindgi mein aise nisha chod gaye ho
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2010, 09:44:35 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2010, 01:53:25 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob Mamta ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2010, 08:41:51 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya side ji aap ne bamushkil waqt nikal kar mere kalaam par apni nazar-e-inayat ki.zahenaseeb!
aap ne jo kalaam pesh kiya bahut hi umda hai.aap ise gazal section me post karen taki or bhi iska lutf utha saken.
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2010, 09:31:35 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2010, 09:58:44 AM » |
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Achchha likhti hain aap Bajpai Ji
Rachna pasand aayee, very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 01:46:53 PM » |
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BEHAD SHUKRIYA SARVESHJI.HUMARI RACHANA KO PASAND KARNE OR SARAHNE KE LIYE KOTISH DHANYAVAAD.
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2010, 01:47:22 PM » |
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THANKS A LOT RAJESH JI !
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2010, 01:48:50 PM » |
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KAPIL JI ,KHAMOSHJI AAP KA BAHUT BAHUT DHANYVAAD.
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«Reply #12 on: July 02, 2010, 12:16:18 PM » |
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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2010, 02:45:10 PM » |
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THANKS KOYAL JI! MUJHE ITANI TAREEF SE SHARMINDA NA KREN.MUJHE NAHI MALOOM KI MAI AAP SAB KI UMEEDON PAR KAHAN TAK KHARI UTAROONGI. BHAVON KI ABHIVYKTI KO SHABDON KA AVLAMBAN MILA TO KAVYA-YATRA AARAMBH HO GAYEE ABHI TO YAATRA KI SHURUAAT HI HAI.AAP LOGON KE PROTSAHAN SE HAR BAAR KUCH NAYA RACHNE KA HOUSLA MILTA HAI.FIR BHI AAP KI SABHI KI SHUKRAGUZAR HOON JINHON NE MERI HAR RACHNA KO SARAHA.
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«Reply #14 on: July 03, 2010, 08:39:16 AM » |
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BHAVON KI ABHIVYKTI KO SHABDON KA AVLAMBAN MILA TO KAVYA-YATRA AARAMBH HO GAYEE...... Wah Mamta-di kya shudh hindi ka prayog kiya hai....lagta hai aapne M.A.(HINDI) KIYA HAI.....Mein nahi jaanti aapki kavay-yatra kahan tak pahuchi....aapka koi Blog ya sanklan ho tou bataaiyega....  THANKS KOYAL JI! MUJHE ITANI TAREEF SE SHARMINDA NA KREN.MUJHE NAHI MALOOM KI MAI AAP SAB KI UMEEDON PAR KAHAN TAK KHARI UTAROONGI. BHAVON KI ABHIVYKTI KO SHABDON KA AVLAMBAN MILA TO KAVYA-YATRA AARAMBH HO GAYEE ABHI TO YAATRA KI SHURUAAT HI HAI.AAP LOGON KE PROTSAHAN SE HAR BAAR KUCH NAYA RACHNE KA HOUSLA MILTA HAI.FIR BHI AAP KI SABHI KI SHUKRAGUZAR HOON JINHON NE MERI HAR RACHNA KO SARAHA.
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