Taa aabad mehboob nu aadab. Till eternity,my compassion is to my love.

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Punjabi etc:Origional version:

Beetey lakan aftaab..
Tuttey hazaaran khwaab..
Bajon terey
Moeya sab rubab..
Kisey na kam chareya shabab...


Ishq sataae beyhisaab..
saarey dil jeo saarey tazaab.

Bhar bethi main umraan di kitaab..
..
Tutteya dil jeon tutti punj aab
Suk kiddan jaawey ishqey di chinaab..
Isq taa nai kidrey mera khraab

Kandey lakha uttey gulaab
Khaar banai jihon sharaab
Neynaa chon wagey ban seylaab
Pee pee mukh te charaeya naqaab
Jion manzoor merey nawaab
Bajon badsoorat jeydey zain mehtaab
Taaeyon lukaan main wich hajaab
Taa abad mehboob nu aadaab..





Nxt version hindi etc.

Beetey lakhoon aaftaab
Tootey hazaaroon khwaab
Bina tumharey
Halaak(killed) sab rubaab
Kis kaam yeh shabaab

Sataata hai ishq binah kisey hisaab
Jalata hai dil jaisey jalaey taizaab


Bhar bethi mein umroon ki kitaab

Tonta dil jaisey tooti thi panch aab(punjab)
Sookh keisey jae ish ki yeh chinaab
Ishq toh nahi kahin mera kharaab

Kantey hain lankhon upar iss gulaab
Khaar-bakhton(thorneydestiny)banei humney sharaab
Nainon sey bahein jo ban sehlaab
Pee pee kar charaeya mukh par naqaab
Yahi shayad hai manzoor merey nawaab
Bina basoorat jiskey zain-mehtaab
Tab hi shup baithi main andar hajaab
Taa aabaad mehboob ko aadab

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Origional version:punjabi urdu pers ..mixed

Beetey lakan aftaab..
Tuttey hazaaran khwaab..
Bajon terey
Moeya sab rubab..
Kisey na kam chareya shabab...


Ishq sataae beyhisaab..
saarey dil jeo saarey tazaab.

Bhar bethi main umraan di kitaab..
..
Tutteya dil jeon tutti punj aab
Suk kiddan jaawey ishqey di chinaab..
Isq taa nai kidrey mera khraab

Kandey lakha uttey gulaab
Khaar banai jihon sharaab
Neynaa chon wagey ban seylaab
Pee pee mukh te charaeya naqaab
Jion manzoor merey nawaab
Bajon badsoorat jeydey zain mehtaab
Taaeyon lukaan main wich hajaab
Taa abad mehboob nu aadaab..





Nxt version: hindi urdu etc mixed

Beetey lakhoon aaftaab
Tootey hazaaroon khwaab
Bina tumharey
Halaak(killed) sab rubaab
Kis kaam yeh shabaab

Sataata hai ishq binah kisey hisaab
Jalata hai dil jaisey jalaey taizaab


Bhar bethi mein umroon ki kitaab

Tonta dil jaisey tooti thi panch aab(punjab)
Sookh keisey jae ish ki yeh chinaab
Ishq toh nahi kahin mera kharaab

Kantey hain lankhon upar iss gulaab
Khaar-bakhton(thorneydestiny)banei humney sharaab
Nainon sey bahein jo ban sehlaab
Pee pee kar charaeya mukh par naqaab
Yahi shayad hai manzoor merey nawaab
Bina basoorat jiskey zain-mehtaab
Tab hi shup baithi main andar hajaab
Taa aabaad mehboob ko aadab

GunRoop love9



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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2018, 09:27:18 PM »
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Punjabi etc:Origional version:

Beetey lakan aftaab..
Tuttey hazaaran khwaab..
Bajon terey
Moeya sab rubab..
Kisey na kam chareya shabab...


Ishq sataae beyhisaab..
saarey dil jeo saarey tazaab.

Bhar bethi main umraan di kitaab..
..
Tutteya dil jeon tutti punj aab
Suk kiddan jaawey ishqey di chinaab..
Isq taa nai kidrey mera khraab

Kandey lakha uttey gulaab
Khaar banai jihon sharaab
Neynaa chon wagey ban seylaab
Pee pee mukh te charaeya naqaab
Jion manzoor merey nawaab
Bajon badsoorat jeydey zain mehtaab
Taaeyon lukaan main wich hajaab
Taa abad mehboob nu aadaab.

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Nxt version hindi etc.

Beetey lakhoon aaftaab
Tootey hazaaroon khwaab
Bina tumharey
Halaak(killed) sab rubaab
Kis kaam yeh shabaab

Sataata hai ishq binah kisey hisaab
Jalata hai dil jaisey jalaey taizaab


Bhar bethi mein umroon ki kitaab

Tonta dil jaisey tooti thi panch aab(punjab)
Sookh keisey jae ish ki yeh chinaab
Ishq toh nahi kahin mera kharaab

Kantey hain lankhon upar iss gulaab
Khaar-bakhton(thorneydestiny)banei humney sharaab
Nainon sey bahein jo ban sehlaab
Pee pee kar charaeya mukh par naqaab
Yahi shayad hai manzoor merey nawaab
Bina basoorat jiskey zain-mehtaab
Tab hi shup baithi main andar hajaab
Taa aabaad mehboob ko aadab

GunRoop love9



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