aik khoobsoorat ghazal

by laaiba on October 07, 2013, 08:57:13 PM
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 Usay apnay farda ki fikr thi, wo jo mera waqif-e-haal tha,
wo jo uski sub'h-e-urooj thi, wohi mera waqt-e-zawal tha!

Mera dard kesay woh janta meri baat kesay woh manta,
woh to khud fana k safar mein tha, usay rokna b muhal tha!

Kahan jao gay mujhay chorr k main yeh pooch pooch k thak gaya,
woh jawab mujh ko na day saka woh to khud sarapa sawal tha!

Woh jo us kay samnnay aa gaya wohi roshni mein naha gaya,
ajab us ki haibat-e husn thi, ajab us ka rang-o-jamal tha!

Dam-e-wapsi usay kya huwa na woh roshni na woh tazgi,
woh sitara kesay bikher gaya, woh to aap apni misaal tha!

Woh mila jo sadiyon baad bhi, meray lab pay koi gila na tha,
usay meri chup nay rula diya, jisay guftagu mein kamal tha!

Mere saath lag k woh ro diya, mujhay faqt itna hi keh saka,
jisay janta tha main zindagi woh to sirf wehm o khayal tha!

''zahid fakhree''
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2013, 09:40:21 PM »
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Waah waah laaiba ji bohut hi khoobsurat
Ghazal se rubaru karwaya apne is ke liye
Apka mashkoor hun.

Zahid sahab ke is ghazal me sabhi
Ashaar kaabil E Daad h lekin

Is ashaar pe to main lut gaya hun

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Woh mila jo sadiyon baad bhi, meray lab pay koi gila na tha,
usay meri chup nay rula diya, jisay guftagu mein kamal tha!
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2013, 10:21:20 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 07, 2013, 08:57:13 PM

 Usay apnay farda ki fikr thi, wo jo mera waqif-e-haal tha,
wo jo uski sub'h-e-urooj thi, wohi mera waqt-e-zawal tha!

Mera dard kesay woh janta meri baat kesay woh manta,
woh to khud fana k safar mein tha, usay rokna b muhal tha!

Kahan jao gay mujhay chorr k main yeh pooch pooch k thak gaya,
woh jawab mujh ko na day saka woh to khud sarapa sawal tha!

Woh jo us kay samnnay aa gaya wohi roshni mein naha gaya,
ajab us ki haibat-e husn thi, ajab us ka rang-o-jamal tha!

Dam-e-wapsi usay kya huwa na woh roshni na woh tazgi,
woh sitara kesay bikher gaya, woh to aap apni misaal tha!

Woh mila jo sadiyon baad bhi, meray lab pay koi gila na tha,
usay meri chup nay rula diya, jisay guftagu mein kamal tha!

Mere saath lag k woh ro diya, mujhay faqt itna hi keh saka,
jisay janta tha main zindagi woh to sirf wehm o khayal tha!

''zahid fakhree''


splendid,marvelous sharing ,ma'am with due respect one rau for this kind and wondrful sharing
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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2013, 10:39:01 PM »
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bahot achi sharing - dili daad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2013, 11:24:10 PM »
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bahut khubsurat gazal....bahut sunder....Usual Smile
mere liye kuch shabd naye the...unhe janane ka avsar mila..shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2013, 11:44:01 PM »
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nice sharing dear
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2013, 11:52:11 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah bahut khoob...
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2013, 12:44:39 AM »
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Nice Sharing.!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2013, 01:15:47 AM »
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Waaaah ..... Brilliant ghazal ....thank you for sharing
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2013, 01:50:13 AM »
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Usay apnay farda ki fikr thi, wo jo mera waqif-e-haal tha,
wo jo uski sub'h-e-urooj thi, wohi mera waqt-e-zawal tha!

Dam-e-wapsi usay kya huwa na woh roshni na woh tazgi,
woh sitara kesay bikher gaya, woh to aap apni misaal tha!

Mere saath lag k woh ro diya, mujhay faqt itna hi keh saka,
jisay janta tha main zindagi woh to sirf wehm o khayal tha!

wah wah wah . wonderful sharing
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2013, 02:10:38 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 07, 2013, 08:57:13 PM

 Usay apnay farda ki fikr thi, wo jo mera waqif-e-haal tha,
wo jo uski sub'h-e-urooj thi, wohi mera waqt-e-zawal tha!

Mera dard kesay woh janta meri baat kesay woh manta,
woh to khud fana k safar mein tha, usay rokna b muhal tha!

Kahan jao gay mujhay chorr k main yeh pooch pooch k thak gaya,
woh jawab mujh ko na day saka woh to khud sarapa sawal tha!

Woh jo us kay samnnay aa gaya wohi roshni mein naha gaya,
ajab us ki haibat-e husn thi, ajab us ka rang-o-jamal tha!

Dam-e-wapsi usay kya huwa na woh roshni na woh tazgi,
woh sitara kesay bikher gaya, woh to aap apni misaal tha!

Woh mila jo sadiyon baad bhi, meray lab pay koi gila na tha,
usay meri chup nay rula diya, jisay guftagu mein kamal tha!

Mere saath lag k woh ro diya, mujhay faqt itna hi keh saka,
jisay janta tha main zindagi woh to sirf wehm o khayal tha!

''zahid fakhree''

wah wah wah.....!bahut achi ghazal share kiya hai ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2013, 02:46:12 AM »
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waqai bahut khubsurat ghazal hai . thanks sharing.
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«Reply #12 on: October 08, 2013, 04:41:29 AM »
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Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!


WaaH laa jawaab sharing ki hai jee, behad heart touching thoughts haiN ... sabhi ashaar gazab ki gehrai se labrez hai...

Is pur asar aur umdaa sharing ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa jee...

Likhate rhaiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2013, 01:39:17 PM »
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Bahut hi achchi sharing laaiba ji....
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«Reply #14 on: October 08, 2013, 03:50:46 PM »
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nice, thanks for sharing
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