DaR

by Sudeept ratna on October 07, 2012, 12:48:07 AM
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Raat ki khamoshi mein
Suni maine ek zordaar cheekh
Chaha uske piche jaana
Jo maang rahi thi apni zindagi ki bheekh

Chaunk ke jaaga main
Jaana wo tha ek sapna
Paseene me tar tha main
Bura tha haal apna

Kisse kahon kya kahon
Samajh me kuch nai aaya
Jaake jaldi  se main eek peg banaya

Khidki pe ho khada cigrett ek  jalai
Kha kar dhuaan uska apni bechaini mitai

Yaad nai aaya kya tha maine dekha
Laut ke bistar pe maine khud ko phenka

Jaane diya khud ko jahan sirf thi tanhayian
Jahan kar rahi thi intezaar mera cheekhti chillati perchainyan
                                   
                                           Sudeept ratna
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2012, 01:15:25 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2012, 02:43:58 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2012, 03:02:22 AM »
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Quote from: Sudeept ratna on October 07, 2012, 12:48:07 AM
Raat ki khamoshi mein
Suni maine ek zordaar cheekh
Chaha uske piche jaana
Jo maang rahi thi apni zindagi ki bheekh

Chaunk ke jaaga main
Jaana wo tha ek sapna
Paseene me tar tha main
Bura tha haal apna

Kisse kahon kya kahon
Samajh me kuch nai aaya
Jaake jaldi  se main eek peg banaya

Khidki pe ho khada cigrett ek  jalai
Kha kar dhuaan uska apni bechaini mitai

Yaad nai aaya kya tha maine dekha
Laut ke bistar pe maine khud ko phenka

Jaane diya khud ko jahan sirf thi tanhayian
Jahan kar rahi thi intezaar mera cheekhti chillati perchainyan
                                   
                                           Sudeept ratna
                                           (NIFT-kannur)


acchi koshish hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2012, 07:14:08 AM »
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Quote from: Sudeept ratna on October 07, 2012, 12:48:07 AM
Raat ki khamoshi mein
Suni maine ek zordaar cheekh
Chaha uske piche jaana
Jo maang rahi thi apni zindagi ki bheekh

Chaunk ke jaaga main
Jaana wo tha ek sapna
Paseene me tar tha main
Bura tha haal apna

Kisse kahon kya kahon
Samajh me kuch nai aaya
Jaake jaldi  se main eek peg banaya

Khidki pe ho khada cigrett ek  jalai
Kha kar dhuaan uska apni bechaini mitai

Yaad nai aaya kya tha maine dekha
Laut ke bistar pe maine khud ko phenka

Jaane diya khud ko jahan sirf thi tanhayian
Jahan kar rahi thi intezaar mera cheekhti chillati perchainyan
                                   
                                           Sudeept ratna
                                           (NIFT-kannur)

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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2012, 09:40:41 AM »
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bahut badhiya....
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2012, 12:58:53 PM »
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very nice....
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2012, 06:38:36 PM »
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bahut khoob...!!!   Applause Applause Applause
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