dil mein koyee our na aayaa tare aane ke baa.d,.....just listining

by laaiba on December 14, 2013, 01:33:19 AM
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aik hee yeh aarzoo thee jis ke mit jaane ke baa.d
dil mein koyee our na aayaa tare aane ke baa.d

jaan e jaana main hi thaa ik tere raste ki deewaa.r
kaam tere ho gaye sab mere mit jaane ke baa.d

choo rahe they zalimon ke sar mere paayoN ke sath
kis qadar oonchaa thaa main soolee pe chadh jaane ke baa.d

poochte phirte hain woh yeh marne waala kou.n thaa,...
aa rahe hain jiskee mayyiat lou.g dafnaane ke baa.d,..

zindagee hai apni sadiq mey kee boutal ki misaa.l,...
pheink dete haiN jise sab dil koh behlaane ke baad,..

aik hee yeh aarzoo thee jis ke mit jaane ke baa.d
dil mein koyee our na aayaa tare aane ke baa.d,.

''mohammad saadiq''
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2013, 01:44:30 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2013, 04:01:42 AM »
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aik hee yeh aarzoo thee jis ke mit jaane ke baa.d
dil mein koyee our na aayaa tare aane ke baa.d

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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2013, 04:38:24 AM »
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Is this poem written by you or M Saddiq?
In any case it is a marvelous piece of poesy!
Keep sharing:)
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2013, 07:18:42 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2013, 12:45:21 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2013, 01:35:53 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 14, 2013, 01:33:19 AM

aik hee yeh aarzoo thee jis ke mit jaane ke baa.d
dil mein koyee our na aayaa tare aane ke baa.d

jaan e jaana main hi thaa ik tere raste ki deewaa.r
kaam tere ho gaye sab mere mit jaane ke baa.d

choo rahe they zalimon ke sar mere paayoN ke sath
kis qadar oonchaa thaa main soolee pe chadh jaane ke baa.d

poochte phirte hain woh yeh marne waala kou.n thaa,...
aa rahe hain jiskee mayyiat lou.g dafnaane ke baa.d,..

zindagee hai apni sadiq mey kee boutal ki misaa.l,...
pheink dete haiN jise sab dil koh behlaane ke baad,..

aik hee yeh aarzoo thee jis ke mit jaane ke baa.d
dil mein koyee our na aayaa tare aane ke baa.d,.

''mohammad saadiq''
WAAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB

VERY NICE SHARING LAAIBA JEE.
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2013, 06:11:52 PM »
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Aa.p sabhee kaa shuqria,..................
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Niceeee Sharingg Laaiba Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Loved It So Muchh... love4
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2013, 02:20:01 AM »
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choo rahe they zalimon ke sar mere paayoN ke sath
kis qadar oonchaa thaa main soolee pe chadh jaane ke baa.d
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