ek shakhs sare seher ko veeraN kar gaya,....

by laaiba on July 26, 2013, 05:36:47 PM
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Rukhsat hoa to baat meri maan kar gaya
Jo us k paas tha wo mujhe daan kar gaya

Bichra kuch iss ada se k rut hi badal gayi
Ik shakhs saray shehar ko veeran kar gaya

Dilchasp waqaia hai k kal ik azeez dost
Apne mafad pe mujhe qurban kar gaya

Kitni sudhar gayi hai judai mein zindagi
Haan wo jafa se mujh pe to ehsan kar gaya

Khalid mein baat baat pe kehta tha jis ko jaan
Wo shakhs akhrish mujhe be jaan kar gaya
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2013, 06:18:16 PM »
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super like.. Applause Applause
nice sharing... Usual Smile
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Beautiful Sharing Laaiba ji.................
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BEAUTIFUL  GHAZAL  .  THANKS  SHARING .
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2013, 07:55:44 PM »
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wah, nice sharing
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beautiful ghazal.
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Kya Baat Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2013, 09:17:23 PM »
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great   Laaibaa ji shukriya
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah bahut sundar rachna,....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2013, 01:03:16 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on July 26, 2013, 05:36:47 PM

Rukhsat hoa to baat meri maan kar gaya
Jo us k paas tha wo mujhe daan kar gaya

Bichra kuch iss ada se k rut hi badal gayi
Ik shakhs saray shehar ko veeran kar gaya

Dilchasp waqaia hai k kal ik azeez dost
Apne mafad pe mujhe qurban kar gaya

Kitni sudhar gayi hai judai mein zindagi
Haan wo jafa se mujh pe to ehsan kar gaya

Khalid mein baat baat pe kehta tha jis ko jaan
Wo shakhs akhrish mujhe be jaan kar gaya
 
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nice sharing,ma'am
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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2013, 03:10:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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aap sabkaa bohat shukria,....................
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bohat shukria aap sabhi kaa,.............
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