Ghazal : Rekhta Pataulvi

by ziaulhaq on February 01, 2012, 06:20:40 PM
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Ganwaya Jinko Paane Ke Liye Apna Jahan Humne
Naa Jaane Kho Dia Un Kaali Zulfon Ko Kahan Humne

Muqaddar Mein Jo Likkhi Theen Wo Jhelin Sakhtiyaan Humne
Guzari Umr Ab Tak Pattharon Ke Darmiyaan Humne

Saza Is Bekhayali Ki Hamein Milni Hi Thi Aakhir
Ke Apnon Ko Samajh Rakkha Tha Kya Kya Maharbaan Humne

Muqaddar Hai, Wo Hi Bedard Nikle Bewafa Nikle
Sunayi Hai Dukhe Dil Ki Jinhein Bhi Daastaan Humne

Taaaqub Karte Karte Kho Gaye Khud, Par Naa Haath Aayeen
Taaajjub Hai ki Kyon Chahi Theen Aakhir Titliyaan Humne

Ab Aandhi Aur Toofan Se Bachein Aye Rekhta Kaise
Ujaalon Ke Liye To Foonk Daala Aashiyaan Humne
   
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2012, 06:59:00 PM »
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Wah wah Zia sahab kya hi khoob ghazal post ki hai aapne. Aapki pasand ki daad deta hun. Aisi hi ghazlein share karte rahiye. Agar khud bhi likhte hon to bhi inayat farmayen.
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2012, 07:11:07 PM »
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bahut umda... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
daad kabool kijeye khushobaad rahiye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bus thoda sa likhne me sudhaar kijye padne me thodi dikkat mahssos hui..
aapne t'aaa'jjub me 3times "a' likha aur bhi kayi chhoti chhoti cheezen hai

magar pesh kash umda hai Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2012, 07:16:17 PM »
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Ganwaya Jinko Paane Ke Liye Apna Jahan Humne
Naa Jaane Kho Dia Un Kaali Zulfon Ko Kahan Humne

Muqaddar Mein Jo Likkhi Theen Wo Jhelin Sakhtiyaan Humne
Guzari Umr Ab Tak Pattharon Ke Darmiyaan Humne

Saza Is Bekhayali Ki Hamein Milni Hi Thi Aakhir
Ke Apnon Ko Samajh Rakkha Tha Kya Kya Maharbaan Humne

Muqaddar Hai, Wo Hi Bedard Nikle Bewafa Nikle
Sunayi Hai Dukhe Dil Ki Jinhein Bhi Daastaan Humne

Taaaqub Karte Karte Kho Gaye Khud, Par Naa Haath Aayeen
Taaajjub Hai ki Kyon Chahi Theen Aakhir Titliyaan Humne

Ab Aandhi Aur Toofan Se Bachein Aye Rekhta Kaise
Ujaalon Ke Liye To Foonk Daala Aashiyaan Humne
   

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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2012, 04:36:07 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2012, 10:28:12 AM »
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Aap Sabhi ka Bahut Bahut Shukria Hosla afzayi ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2012, 11:50:58 AM »
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Wah Zia sahab bahot khoobsurat ghazal aapne share ki hai. Aapki pasand ki daad deta hun.
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