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Hale Dil Gam Ka

by dksaxenabsnl on February 06, 2013, 05:19:54 PM

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Hal-E-Dil Gam Ka Sunate Jaeeye,
Shart Yeh Hai Muskarate Jaeeye.
Apko Jaate na Dekha Jaayega,
Shamma Ko Pehle Bujhate Jaeeye.
Dushmanon Se Pyar Ho Jayega,
Doston Ko Aajmate Jaeeye.
Roshni Mehdood (Limited) ho Jinki Khumar,
Un Chiragon Ko Bujhate Jaeeye.

Phir na Simtegi E Dost Bikhar Jayegi,
Zindgi Zulf nahi hai Jo Sanwar Jayegi.


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Re: Hale Dil Gam Ka

«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 05:30:49 PM »

Waaaaah... bahut khoob...
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RAJAN KONDAL

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Re: Hale Dil Gam Ka

«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 05:38:44 PM »

nice ji


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Re: Hale Dil Gam Ka

«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 05:42:40 PM »

Barhiya Intikhab Bohat Khoob Applause


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Hale Dil Gam Ka

«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 07:03:27 PM »

Waah, bahut badhiya, nice sharing.


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Re: Hale Dil Gam Ka

«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2013, 12:44:04 AM »

very nice


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Re: Hale Dil Gam Ka

«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2013, 02:14:22 AM »

Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on February 06, 2013, 05:19:54 PM

achchi ghazal share ki hai aapne shayad ye shair aap likhna bhool gaye saxena saheb

shukriyaa lutf-e-musal_sal kaa magar
gaahe gaahe dil ko dukhaate jaayiye.

khumar barabankvi sb ki ghazal hai,
barahe karam jab bhi kisi aur shayar ka kalaam post karen to unka naam zaroor post kareN. ya agar naam na maloom ho to N/M likh diya karen.. shukriya aate rahiye ... likhte rahiye aur muskurate rahiye