MAA:Share Poetry You Like

ANUKRITI-MATHUR

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saal ke baad aaya ye din
yaad aaye sab pal chin
na bhooli ek bhi chot ya khushi
na tumne bhoolaya mera kol janamdin
aur me jo tumhari perchayi hu
karti hu tumko pyaar
har pal
khamosh tanhayi me
arpan kiye h shardha ke fool tumko
janti hu mile h tumko
kyoki dekhi h mene tumahari aankhe
pyaar or gaurav se bhari mujh per
jab bhi me tumhare bataye gye usoolo per chalti hu
aaj tumhare janam din per maa
archna kar rahi hu me tumhari
shardha pyaar or wishvash ke chand fool liye


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 09:04:40 AM »


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sahal

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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 09:17:09 AM »

very good ....keep writing


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gaytri gupta

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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2012, 12:09:03 PM »

v nice.........


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mkv

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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2012, 07:05:09 PM »

Bahut accha likha hai aapne
par..ise aapne poetry lounge me post kiya hai (jo doosro ke dwaara likhi posts kee sharing ke liye hai)
i hope you understand my point.


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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2012, 07:09:30 PM »

Bahaut khoob !!! Is shraddha, sneh aur prem se bhari pyari rachna par apko dheron daad !!


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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2012, 02:03:16 AM »

heart touching


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Aarish

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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2012, 04:28:19 AM »

Quote from: ANUKRITI-MATHUR on November 03, 2012, 08:48:06 AM

Bohut khoob , behad khoobsurat kavita hai, mubarakbaad qubool kijiye


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