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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta
wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta
aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta
meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta
zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta
doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta
tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 11:08:37 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2009, 11:09:52 AM » |
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thnx madhu
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2009, 12:59:12 PM » |
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta
wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta
aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta
meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta
zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta
doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta
tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta
andaaz-e-byaan bahut hi khub hai ..samnoj ji..
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2009, 01:27:19 PM » |
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta
wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta
aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta
meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta
zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta
doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta
tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta
Samnoj ji bahut accha likha hai aapne.
tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta
Dil mein gehra asar ker gaya... Bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2009, 02:01:39 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2009, 02:21:15 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2009, 11:35:59 AM » |
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thanx Umraan, Pooja ji, TGR n jo guest hai
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2010, 07:28:52 AM » |
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta
wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta
aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta
meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta
zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta
doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta
tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta
Bahut Khoob Samnoj Ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2010, 07:50:52 AM » |
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thanx rajesh
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2010, 08:14:28 AM » |
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bahut achche samnoj bhai kya baat hai
ek bikhra hua nagma ek toota hua taara hoon mein apni takdeer se lad lad k bahut haara hoon har aankh dekhti hai na jaane kyun mujhko hikaat se kissii k liye deewana toh kissii k liye AWAARA hoon
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2010, 08:18:42 AM » |
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badhya likha hai sahil
pyaar mahnga hai aur nafrat yaha sasti hai bachke chalna diwane, te awaaro ki basti hai
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2010, 08:01:27 AM » |
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thanx madhu
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2010, 08:09:56 AM » |
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thanx kash
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