Zamen,zamen hi rahi

by suman59 on January 11, 2013, 09:06:31 AM
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Para na farq an-nokhi zuban likhnay say,
Zamen,zamen hi rahi, aasman likhnay say,

Raha tha jis say bohut gehra ta'alluq mera,
Woh ban saka na meri jaan, 'JAAN' likhnay say,

Panah mil na saki 1 pal kabhi mujko,
Kisi ujjar jagah ko makan likhnay say,

Karri tapish say jhulasta raha badan mera,
K dhoop, dhoop rahi saibaan likhnay say.
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2013, 09:17:51 AM »
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kitne aala ashaar hain
kitne saaf bayaan hain
nihayat pyare alfaz hain
khubsurat adaygi, hame qayl kar chale hain
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2013, 10:57:36 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2013, 11:47:24 AM »
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woooooooooooow! sumanjee really excellent creation.mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2013, 03:10:22 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on January 11, 2013, 09:06:31 AM
Para na farq an-nokhi zuban likhnay say,
Zamen,zamen hi rahi, aasman likhnay say,

Raha tha jis say bohut gehra ta'alluq mera,
Woh ban saka na meri jaan, 'JAAN' likhnay say,

Panah mil na saki 1 pal kabhi mujko,
Kisi ujjar jagah ko makan likhnay say,

Karri tapish say jhulasta raha badan mera,
K dhoop, dhoop rahi saibaan likhnay say.


MARHABA MARHABA MARHABA ....DIL  LUT GAYA ISS KALAM PE ....SUBHAN ALLAH
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2013, 06:35:37 PM »
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wah sumanji wah...jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye, kam hai....very very nice Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 02:04:50 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2013, 02:30:46 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2013, 08:40:17 AM »
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Wow grt sharing.
Mazaa aa gayaaa.
Thanks for for sharing such a grt gazal
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