न गुजरे बहुत बस कुछ साल ऐसा हो ....

by Bishwajeet Anand Bsu on March 22, 2013, 01:38:00 PM
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न गुजरे बहुत बस कुछ साल ऐसा हो ....
की जैसा हाल मेरा है  तेरा भी हाल वैसा हो ...
छोड़ो की जिद थी हमें जिंदगी भर साथ रहने की ..
मिले वो नींद में आकर मेरा हर ख्वाब ऐसा हो ...
चाहे जान से ज्यादा मिले कोई उसे ऐसा ....
मगर ताउम्र वो तरसें मेरा प्यार ऐसा हो ....

न गुजरे बहुत बस कुछ साल ऐसा हो ....
की जैसा हाल मेरा है  तेरा भी हाल वैसा हो ...

वो कहते हैं की वो बेअसर हैं खयालातों से अपने ...
जी ले फिर से वो मुझको कुछ कमाल ऐसा हो ...
लोग बच कर चलते हैं कहीं फंस न जाये जालों में ..
उम्र भर कैद रह जाऊ अगर जुल्फों का जाल तुमसा हो ....

न गुजरे बहुत बस कुछ साल ऐसा हो ....
की जैसा हाल मेरा है  तेरा भी हाल वैसा हो ...
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«Reply #1 on: March 22, 2013, 01:46:44 PM »
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nice......
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«Reply #2 on: March 22, 2013, 01:47:28 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2013, 04:05:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2013, 10:08:24 PM »
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Hi Bishwajeet ji,

aapne bahut achchaa likhaa hai magar isko galat section me post kiyaa hai. please aap apne khud ke likhe huye poems 'Poetry Launge > Share Poetry You Like' section me naa daalen. Ye section shared poetry ke liye hai. Apne likhe poems aap Shayari (Poetry) or Sahayri section me daaliye.

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