Armaan ke aap se tum tum se tuu honge..............Abulasad

by Abul Asad on January 17, 2013, 09:09:58 PM
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Jaan-e muntazir ki baaten jo chidhi
Hamari duu-ba-duu ki umeed le badhi

Jaan: beloved, Muntazir: much awaited, jis ka intezaar ho
Chidhi: started, Du-ba-du: aamne saamne hona, face to face


Husn ho to phir charche bhi lazimi hon
Quu-ba-quu raqibon ki nazren le badhi
 
Lazimi: compulsory, zaroori, Quu-ba-quu:  lane by lane, gali gali
Raqib: competitor in love,

 
Khud ko sambhaale sambhaale mere
Dil ki Arzoo ki arzoo dhalii na badhi

Armaan ke aap se tum tum se tuu honge
Beechon beech meri ruswaai bhi yun badhi

Ruswai: badnami, illfame.

Unke surkh chehre ke ranj se ‘Abul’
Baad-e saba bhi thami so thami na badhi

Surkh: laal, red.  Baad-e Saba: early morning’s breeze,
subah ki taza hawa

 
Abul Asad
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2013, 12:16:49 AM »
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Jaan-e muntazir ki baaten jo chidhi
Hamari duu-ba-duu ki umeed le badhi

Jaan: beloved, Muntazir: much awaited, jis ka intezaar ho
Chidhi: started, Du-ba-du: aamne saamne hona, face to face


Husn ho to phir charche bhi lazimi hon
Quu-ba-quu raqibon ki nazren le badhi
 
Lazimi: compulsory, zaroori, Quu-ba-quu:  lane by lane, gali gali
Raqib: competitor in love,

 
Khud ko sambhaale sambhaale mere
Dil ki Arzoo ki arzoo dhalii na badhi

Armaan ke aap se tum tum se tuu honge
Beechon beech meri ruswaai bhi yun badhi

Ruswai: badnami, illfame.

Unke surkh chehre ke ranj se ‘Abul’
Baad-e saba bhi thami so thami na badhi

Surkh: laal, red.  Baad-e Saba: early morning’s breeze,
subah ki taza hawa

 
Abul Asad

very well said Abul Asad. congratulations
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2013, 03:32:27 AM »
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very well said Abul Asad. congratulations

Thank you lion kishore
your comments are appreciated
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2013, 03:49:59 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Abul ji....!!!


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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2013, 03:51:32 AM »
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VERY NICE ABUL JI CONGRATS
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2013, 04:28:59 AM »
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bahut khoob
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bahut khoob asad jee. dheron daad
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