Baat ho jaati hai!

by sapana on May 07, 2009, 06:34:02 PM
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बात हो जाती है
कई अफ़साने बन जाते है,
तेरी गुलाबसे होंठ खुलते है,
कई अधूरी बात हो जाती है,
जब तेरे नयन मिलते है,
सिमटके रेह जाती है शबनम,
जब तेरी आँखोसे मोती टपकते है।
सपना
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 07:23:17 PM »
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pahli baar padne main kuch adhuri si kavita lagi apki. magar phir dobara parra to samjh main ayya ki last ki teem line ek hai...

Nice work!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 07:42:58 PM »
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ye .I bhut %Ub hW spna jI
bs Eese hI il%te rihE   
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 09:28:51 PM »
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Thanks Pooja,
Sapana
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 09:29:17 PM »
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Thanks Rajeshji!
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 09:47:51 PM »
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thanks Kaashji>

I am learning.
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2009, 07:44:17 AM »
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Bohat khoob Sapana
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 08:02:09 AM »
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Nice one Sapna JI!
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2009, 08:12:51 PM »
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Wow.. Sapana Ji.. WAqai Bahut Khubsoorat Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2009, 09:35:33 PM »
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Thanks Mannji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2009, 09:36:32 PM »
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thanks sajidji.
sukriya dadke liye Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2009, 09:37:41 PM »
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sukriya Salama Usual Smile
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